TwistedTsunami
Yeah … one more china Novel pig-Shit.Fckin copy cats. Why must it tarnish all the others novel on this website.And I mean what the fuck is the enmity between china folks and heavens . . I mean did they stole ur wife or something, give the fkin goddam explanation. Why every goddam china MC defies havens why not hell. Why so over-fuckin-powered. Why this trashy cultivation-shit. You just fucking consume random shit and get powerful. Kill other people like mosquitoes. And guys bellow are some famous know lines that gets used in every goddam novels of their. You can copy technology of the world but its clear .not Creativity.1“. Lick my boots and kneel before me, Maybe I will let you live’ “2.“4000 years old, 300000 years old”3.I am in shit-realm cultivator Max-Pro-Utra-Grand-Master, where is you just a lowly piss-realm noob cultivator. You can’t win”
"These few days, Shi Sheng had been a bit out of sorts. She suspected that she'd been struck dumb by that lightning, for now she found Bu Jingyun more pleasing to the eyes than before. Sometimes..."What? Sometimes what? Sometimes you felt that he's Feng Ci or something? You're feeling that you're falling for him? So frustrating
If you want a novel with similar story try *The Eminence in Shadow* .you guys will love it
This book is quite interesting and one can keep reading and reading
Great work on your book, can't wait to catch up to the latest chapters
When will you upload the new chapter ..................................................................
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The author is an awful bastard who made me think this was just going to be a common harem story at first, just to end up giving me this disgustingly amazing story.
Despite what it may seem, the idea of the story is played out in an incredibly novel way, making me and many others unable to put it down. The characters are actually fleshed out, with interactions that actually make sense. While managing to emphasize the main character, the other characts, and the world itself, all hold purpose.
Even with all my praise, I will not claim this is a perfect story, nor do I think the story is for everyone. Yet, I have truly enjoyed this story thus far, and the only thing that truly leaves me upset is being unable to read more of it.
Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.
Sometimes I want to go psycho
I abandoned this novel due to not having enough coins a few months ago, but they were restocked and ready to be happily used on this. Well... they're gonna already but you'd better believe I'll be using the daily login coins! I won't give up this time, it's time to save!
The classic case of a story with no ending. Where plot scenarios are repeated every 100 chapters(out of the 5k+ chapters) but using different names for the enemies that end up having the exact same personality and goal as the last enemy. It's not the worst story on this site, but it isn't average nor a good read. Considering the amount of novels flooding into this site, you really shouldn't ever run out of better stories to read, to justify picking this one.
Good novel *master chief*
