So far, This one had me laughing. From, 90th's time's a charm, to his pissed father, to his classmates and teacher roaring in laughter. This does need editing though. There were also some tense slippages, but all and all, I was absorbed into the world you set up. If I can picture it, the scene, you've got me. Added it.Are you going to publish this?
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I know that this story is based on the idea of plagiarizing modern day copyrighted materials and turning them into profits in an alternate universe. Yes. That is true and the writers have never denied this fact.However, if you give this novel a chance you’ll realize just how much of a gem it is. It’s a genuinely funny comedy story that is not afraid to highlight and satirize the greed of modern corporations. Highly recommend for a good laugh.
I like novels with System-chan and I like novels with rebirth back in time. This novel has both.This is a novel with an Indian protagonist. Well and I'm an Indian.So I'm rating this 5 stars for the above reasons.Upto where I have read it has been interesting.Though a 20 something woman being attracted to and falling in love with a 10 year old is far fetched, I'm mean there is nothing attractive about a 10 year old kid. If he was atpeast 14 it would have been better. Or may be the woman us a shotacon. But hey this is a work of fiction so why not. Many original writers have huge info dumps in their novels and can't write the dialogues right. In case of this novel till now there is no large info dumps and dialogues are good with few tolerable spelling and grammatical mistakes.Anyway keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the future chapters. I will try to spend Power stones to vote this novel.
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Well, I'm quite suspect for writing a review as I'm fan of VR novels but I think it's a good novel full of potential. There's no face slapping nor random evil wrathful crazy guy that hates mc for whatever reason, at least till now.Somewhat laid-back but good feeling with no revenge neither huge debt to pay that forces some actions.I recommend as a tranquil read
I have had a remarkable time reading this and I can't wait to see what comes next. "The Gamer's System" has been written by one of many authors that are truly worthy of praise!
smooth, comedic and a fresh plot. Really hope this gets pickedits fun to see our mc facing various situation, the use of emoiji is proper and it was a nice story to read.
I really like this book a lot and im sad that we never got to see the whole story. dhdhdhebudjsgd7ehrgeudjrgu3jrurhdhrhrjrjjrj5i55ygedh
The story is boring, immensely, I forced myself through walls of exposition that explained nothing, the author either expects you to already know 3 book’s worth of chinese mythology becore you even read the first paragraph.At one point the MC hands out tablets with cultivation techniques and the primitive races (humans? It never specifies) learn from them, then it says he gained 1% of Merit of Creation, which is considered a ‘great harvest’... What the hell does this mean? What’s the MC’s end goal? I have no idea, the writing is awful.
This is one of the few novels that I like on this website. Specially the mc of this novel who is not dumb, narcissist or hypocrite and takes rational decision when necessary is to my liking. But the inconsistent translation speed is really making me lose interest in this novel. If nothing is done about it then sadly I would have to drop this novel from my reading list.
It's a good novel, the story is very interesting, but I feel that even though it's a double cultivation novel, it has a lot of lemons, so much so that it makes the plot stand a little still, I think that even in this type of novel there must be a consensus between the plot progression and the lemons