Straight into my library. The novel is very good.World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't knowUpdating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author. Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
Story is good, mc is an idiot. Soo many plot holes and inconsistencies. Mc is all about himself one minute next he isn’ and vise versa. Harem is okay, but once again dense mc. It’ okay but would save your fp for better stories
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In a word; Excellent! The story is basically a detective story set in ancient times but with Qi and supernatural powers. The normal tropes of transmigrator with good luck and using modern thinking to get ahead are there but the MC has no system and starts as a low-level martial artist with no way to easily improve. He need to use his brain, and the novel is better for it. Excellent!
An awesome novel.Completely underrated.Writing quality and update stability are very good.Author also has good control over the book's story development and world background.Give it a try.
this story is awesomeAuthor olz tell me you have not dropped this story or some shit like that or else i might fall in despair i really like this novel and its been a rather long time since an upload
Boring as hell. I read through just to get a better sleep.Author thinks that if mc became during overnight - he can create his own set of Kung Fu, learn tennis just by watching, become proficient in medicine and acupuncture just by thinking it over. Every bad guy has shrill loud voice and is disgusting. Every Tycoon love mc from the get on. All good girls have heavenly body and angelic voices and are good to mc. Bland and boring story.
My God..this story is amazing. I know my review is long but please read it as I give a basic summary of every subject. I truly believe that this is the best of the current trial reads.My review also contains spoilers, rather than checking the mark for spoilers, I left it open because I know a lot of people will completely ignore a real review if they believe it has to many spoilers. The spoilers included only mention the changes in World Background compared to our Real Earth. I mentioned these spoilers because I believe they are one of the main selling points of this novel and will likely be a reason people choose to read or not.I’ve literally never given a review for a trial read because the good ones are either the last to come out or never come out at all. Translation Quality: Translation quality is perfect as far as I can tell. I’m not exactly an English major but I’ve read plenty of books and the grammar seems fine as well.Stability Updating: Obviously I can’t rate stability updating because it’s a trial read with a limit of 60 chapters until it’s voted through.Story Development: The background plot has already been partially explained as far as Chapter 13. The World’s advancements have all been set forth by a mysterious system. I’ll further explain this in world background. Everything seems fine so far and there hasn’t been any plot holes and everything has been explained in ways that actually make sense. Historic moments are explained in a paranormal sense that keeps you interested. The system is not introduced until certain things occur and there are restrictions on who receives the system and why it exist.Character Development: The MC is an eccentric genius and the author has developed him literally perfectly. The MC goes beyond your usual “smart MC”, though he acts quite weird at times, it’s explained that because he is so weird, he has learned many things with his higher than normal intelligence. If you read the first chapter you’ll completely understand what I mean, his actions and words in the first chapter alone; do well to show off his characteristics and personality. Other than the MC, not many people have been mentioned as far as Chapter 13 but those that were; were shown quite well. By that I mean they all had clear stories and they don’t give you the usual feel of a random side character that’ll be thrown away later. World Background: The story seems to be set in current time Earth. Everything has some odd twist set forth by the system I mentioned in Story Development. It’s explained that all evolutionary advancements have been set forth by the system as of now. The system sets forth “games” called “Killing Fields”. In this games, the system chooses either a large scale or small scale field depending on the current advancements of the world. It chooses its initial players for specific reasons that haven’t been completely stated but seem reasonable. Human evolution is an aspect created by the system. Many races have gone extinct due to punishment from the system when it finds the game to not be helping the race advance. Dinosaurs are one of the races punished by the system. Humans while not extinct, have also been punished by the system. All of this explained as real moments in history with a paranormal twist. Again, please vote for this story when it comes time, I truly believe it’s the best of the current trial reads.
i just started reading your novel and so far it is really good , you are doing well for a beginner , loved the way you described your characters , i wish you all the best in the future good luck author.