Amostra
Wtf. Why is this novel here again?☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁
Heart Story pls dont stop ...................................................................................................................
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool, i saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay the stooooooooooooooooooooory why do I need to write so many characters for a review? Im new.
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It's a good book, and I will recommend it to people of all ages and genres to at least give it a try, with the only problem being the lack of updates in the last 3 years.
kind sir more chapters pleaseeeeeeeeeee????
Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway.Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel.After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me. I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was. After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom. I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside.Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.
Ayo, it's the Author here. Just want to say, if you're looking for a novel entirely based in a video game, this won't be for you. This novel does have IRL parts in it, some expanding for a couple of chapters even.However, if this novel is what you're looking for, I hope you enjoyed the read. Remember, if you like it, vote for it and leave a review.
isn't this just a kind of copy of, I have a martial arts panel? bruh thats kinda trashy since the name is basically implying a copy. can I get a rip in the chat.
This is somewhat unreadable with the westernized names.. they don't fit in this xuanhuan beast story at all..........................................
Another interesting idea poorly written. I liked how the author did the 'Everyone on earth was sent to another world' idea. Instead of everyone having their own plot of land (which I never really cared for), instead they're sent in groups of 1000 I believe it was. But the author CANNOT keep his information straight. In the beginning everyone is told they have one week to get to level 10, or Die, but by chapter 40 I believe 5 days have passed and the highest level is 4, and the 'one week or die' was never mentioned again. The MC's first ability gave him increased stats and the ability to increase his stats by eating the monsters/beasts. But the author can't seem to keep the MC's stats straight, never telling how (or even if) the MC is distributing them, forgetting what he said they were in previous chapters, etc. And as for the other people, they're so poorly written and one-dimensional the story would've been better without them. And finally there are a few missing chapters, that were all added on in the end. I can see why this wasn't picked up, so there's only 40 chapters here.
Not a fake review, unlike my name!just from the name, I am biased towards this novel.You can see the 'ONLINE' right?Since the alien corona attacked us everything has been going online so should these novels well that's my reason hope you all give it a try just like me *proceeds to click on chapter 1*
