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I really want to call this trash but it will need to improve a lot for this become trash.Zzzzsaash7svsuvsuvsuvsuvsvusbushusbubsivsvsuvusvusvsvuvsuvus usbudbudv
I love this kinds of novels I hope it doesn't suddenly turn into novels like the Fishing the Myriad Heavens where the story suddenly diverted from main topic which is fishing to Cultivation novel.
The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell.
When i started reading this novel, it became more and more interesting with the MC's developement, but as kept reading on, the author seems to completely scrap all of the MCs development at the start of a new arc. His stats also dont match his abilities, and many of skills are ignored as if they never existed even tho they did 100 chapters back.The fun parts bout reading this novel is about his development plans and how his mechs are used in battles, and even tho the "intellect level" of the MC is high, he keeps doing the same stupid mistakes over and over again, not improving them or getting worse from them. The arcs seem to continue on for 30-50 chapters and only 7-10 or so of those chapters are actually part of the story, the rest are just word count/chapter count requirement. I have to stop reading this novel now, cause the author has already detracted from what makes this such a good story.Thank you tho author, it was a fun ride, the first 100 or so chapters.
This is a pretty interesting read so far, it’s suspense filled and keeps you totally immersed in the story. I look forward to the upcoming chapters...
next kilaat thoooor. Crazy up yeeees
My first and favourite Book to Read on the Reading App.Love the plot even though its a very loooooong story with all those twists and turn will keep you on your toes and make you crave for more even though you'll be paying much.I think I've read this about more 6x now.Bravo ... Author
Amazing a very nice novel
the book is great but I'm losing patience waiting on new chapters!!! I'm about ready to delete Goodnovel since they aren't keeping up with the customer service.... you should not have to wait more than a week for the story update and when it is updated, it's short and not worth the wait.
Loved it, i wish it was a tad bit longer, expanding on some backgrounds or more visuals possibly.
I don't like how the story is leaning toward Fane having two wives. If he marries the little girl, then I won't finish the story. She is too pushy and obnoxious. I loved the book up until she came in.