I love this book already! The characters personality fits perfectly considering he’s a skeleton, and I find the way the world is set up very interesting. I hope the author keeps on posting!
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Honestly, when I read only 2 chapters, I was curious about the continuation of this story, especially since the grammar is good and the fantasy story is captivating, I really love it.I hope this story is the Winner in this WPC ✨
Bien mais l'auteur est trop engagé dans la lutte LGBT que ça gâché l'histoire.Le plus frappant et pour l'histoire sur sakura ou elle accuse LITTÉRALEMENT tous ce qui ne pense pas comme elle ou qui n'agissent pas comme elle le veut d'homophobe et de transphobe.... une féministe radical typique.Mais sinon bonne histoire ?
Humble Author review: The Star Sovereign is a slow pace cultivation backstory for one of my characters in the main series Magic Martial World written in Lonely Attack on a Different World style? Kind of?? Maybe??? It's pretty good so just check mine out.If you just wanna pass time and have a good read, you can come try out my story. I'm already happy that I can juggle 2 stories at the same time : )
Do you like yanderes? Do you also like the unconditional crazy passionate love that they offer? Do you often wonder what you would do if you suddenly wake up and find yourself married to, not one, not two, but three sexy women? Well, here are 3 beautiful and dangerous yanderes for you to read about.I usually don't give reviews for stories with less than 50 chapters, but for this one, it's an exception. My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires (M3WBV) follows an MC who wakes up after turning into a vampire, and finds out the during the process he is now married to a beautiful vampire, named Violet Snow. So far, there isn't much plot development, except the MC discovering more about the supernatural world that he now has become a part of, and that he also has 2 more wives due to an accident during the vampire conversion process.I foresee great potential with this story, and I hope that the author can deliver.In the first 25 chapters you'll experience sweet romantic moments, intrigue, mystery, and some unique characters. And it's definitely the unique characters and their portrayals that have had me hooked with this story. From the almost-bipolar yandere wife, to the stoic maid, and the MCs over-enthusiastic family - all of their interaction are fun to read, and generally enjoyable.TL;DR: Give this novel a try if you would like read about a good guy, who suddenly finds himself thrust into a marriage between 3 yandere vampires, and want to follow their developments.
at first, I thought the world setting might be apocalyptic with no nation every man on his own but in this novel china exists and of all the novel I read if china exist in the novel it's gonna be filled with nationalism and racism thus bye bye
The story is great and very engaging. I really like the writing here however, I must say that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there. If you can turn a blind eye to it, than you will most likely love this story.
What is the name of the novel where the MC can do something similar to stop time for 2000 days or something, then he uses this time to study, learn piano etc.
i read 20 chapters
i don't know the cultivation system and i know nothing about the world exept it has at least 9 mountains where the sect is nothing more.
translation is rather bad. example he finished foundation realm over night but it says he joined the sect over night as chapter title
update stability: hard to rate because only trial read
character design: don't really know anything about the charakters except mc has a login system where he get things every day and he doesn't want to do anything except sitting in his cave and cultivate. no backround info no real emotions no ambitions.
every fight is someone tries to attack him and he attacks back 1 time with his fist, booooom enemy dead
all in all its a bland story
First off, thanks for the content purple_mage. I've enjoyed reading so far. A few things I'd like to say. Please work on your grammar and spelling. I think you just need to proofread a bit more and it will fix most of the mistakes. In terms of the story itself and moving forward, I think you should really keep in mind: A. pacing B. conflict . Right now the pacing is moving very fast, which is fine, but just be careful because if you do slow it down, it can be jarring for the reader. The only real downside to fast pacing is character development can be kind of neglected in favor of fast plot. In terms of conflict.. I think it's no secret that our MC is OP, and that is intended. Which is just fine. You just have to get creative to write a real conflict for him to face. Remember, not all conflicts have to involve swords and bloodshed and who has the higher cultivation realm. Finally, I REALLY hope you, in future, put some love into character development, especially for the female characters (the harem). Interactions, dialogue, maybe even dedicated chapters from the woman's perspective? A little bit of love can go a long way. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take things!
Yes, more HP, more!
I'd like it if it gets picked.
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