Book was great UNTIL the author went and trashed everything he worked on for the first few hundred chapters. He literally destroys the whole planet they live on and tosses them onto another planet where humans are just slaves. All the characters, world building, etc. gone in one chapter. What gets me is after there planet with all their family was destroyed there is no grieving. They are just kind of like well that sucks now let's continue. That being said if you can get over that the book is good. The writing quality is good, the release rate is good, the grammar is good. I dropped it about 50 chapters after they blew up the original planet.
This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this.Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territoryLiu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall! try doing this-Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls.As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.
"Yes, shit ...." We answer in unison.
How could he not be, the student with the most highes card report school value and Exp (Experience), we can see how much Exp someone was, with the magic "ExpScene". In a school there are 2 things that can be obtained, first is Exp second is some random value in your card report school.
We don't even know why humans can't see our world, why we can't interact with them.
Never! Never!
"YEAH" JM
Gak terasa smbil ngobrol kita sudah mau sampai ditempat kerja, dari kejauhan aku lihat pegawai yang lama sudah datang termaksud bg rey yang aku suka, suka bukan bearti naksir ya, suka dalam artian ku ini hanya la suka karena rambutnya ikal, kulit putih dan muka baby fres enak di pandang, hehe
It's mainly because a series of irl stuff.
Sabrina let her arm go and sneer. "You really have guts huh?"
"Wait a minute," I interrupted. "How about saying you'll come?"
All that glitters is gold