another story marked completed but not completed. it makes me really annoyed u know paying for chapters and then boom here to a wasted end which may never come
Delightful read ! Mc is op and smart. I'm tired of braindead betas Instead of letting people go cry go their sect leaders second elders uncle to call the astranged second son of the demonic sect to have vengeance on Mc he just finished them right there LMAO Love it fr
Well, it involves the seven sins. This is quite a big story theme. I hope for the author to pull it through. Great job so far with the characters. ???
Trust, your story is just nice. I don't have much to say but I feel like Jonah could have actually succeeded without having to sacrifice himself. I just hope he somehow comes back later on.Asides that, the story is too good to be fiction even ?
Well, the usual, a powerful but at the same time boring protagonist, what's the point of being a god if you're going to pretend to be normal? Now about the grammar, I don't have much to say, I read it through the translator. The world building is good, better than many authors, the development is slow, but not suffocating. Plot: 4.5 generic MC: 2.5 boring World building: 10
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Hey, I think the author already knows this, but I’ve rarely seen a web novel that conveys emotions this well. The concept is original, the narration is smooth, the interactions feel natural, and the drama is used perfectly. Honestly, I don’t understand how some other works can be more popular when their quality is so bad. I really hope you’ll continue your work because it’s one of the best I’ve read. I can’t afford the paid chapters for now, so I’ll just leave a review and give you my power stones regularly.
Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!
Amazing story, this is really engaging, I just read 50 chap non stop, can't wait for more.
Of course, I'd give my work a biased 5 star rating. Apocalyptic world background ✅️Interesting Plot ✅️Good characters ✅️Action ✅️This is something I created years back and refined over time, so it is well written if I do say so myself. It is going to be quite the roller coaster. I don't want to spoil things, but feel free to ask me questions here. One thing to know is that MC doesn't mean what you think it does.
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A very good novel with interesting story. very good writing quality and i Hope WE get more chapters. keep up the good work author. ???