I will give 5 for the writing quality and no shit in this novel like beta MC and other stuff.The story has a great start, good plot and interesting characters. I like kingdom building and cultivation novels, the story has good Phase. keep it up author ?
Beter than average translation, but everything is too rushed. Asif the author is on speed and you have to keep up. Too many little little things are wrong in the TL to make it fun to read. Thus I stopped reading
Translation is garbage, names and genders keep changing, the story is unoriginal and has been done to death, i honestly don't understand how anyone still reads this sort of garbage, we've had a novel like this every week for the past year.
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This story is really good but it hasent been updated in way to long it been like 6 months now. I finished this hole thing in like an hour and these types of stories are hard to find but are really good but sadly there havent been anymore updates. STILL MAD THAT THERE ARENT ANY NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!
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Well written. The characters are relatable even though they are made up. The MC is thank god also unique. After reading stories that are near copies of each other, reading this, has been very refreshing and fun. I'm not disappointed for spending money on this story
From the first 20 chapter, this is the only interesting trial read novel this week, pretty good translation, no gender mix up, name not mixed up.
A hidden gem of a novel with a lot of potential. The thing which made me give low rating is the really slow pacing of the novel. 60 chapters in and it's still nothing interesting. The MC used his powers like a maximum of 5 times. There are no concrete FL's except for the senior disciple and his sister? The writing quality and the updates are good, the pacing of the story is bad. You can skip a lot of chapter like the tournament arc and all which make no sense for being there except for some character introductions. I'm not gonna read 10-20 chapters for 2 characters to get introduced...
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