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truthfully your book has got me hooked. it told with a very relaxing style of narractive. Opal is a very nice character, and from what I have seen presently, a simple one (as of now). can't wait to see her growth as a character. though I want to know if she gets a love interest. but a nice book. kudos author
The story is excellent...............................................I just hope that you don't pace it too fast..................................This story is good when you look for it as a long term story....ATB I will cheer you as a reader
Ill be the first to explain I guess. The book is more of a scholarly article on society, at least the first and only chapter is. It talks of relationships between competitors and team members on a deep scale often using excerpts from literary giants such as Homer and The Art of war to put forward its points. It is fascinating to read if you are interested in the topic or scholarly articles. The writing quality is very good and even satisfying to a degree. There however is no story, no characters, no world, nothing, zilch. So the rating I can give this book currently is only so much. If a story is produced with writing quality at the level of the first chapter and the other categories can be up to par then this book might even become famous. Keep it up author.One last point, the first chapter is extremely long. This is not a result of the content being large but the author has copy pasted the same article over and over again for a reason which I cannot guess.
Suspense-filled, exciting.Definitely a book worth reading.It takes the reader on, throughout the entire story ?
This is a review of the first seven chapters. This story is a mystery about how a naked dead body ended up inside an architect’s bathtub. The detective is a flopish lord who solves mysteries as a hobby. The action is fast paced. The setting is London during World War Two. The English class system is a part of the story. If you like history mysteries, you should try this story.
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This is one of those feel-good kinds of stories, and indeed it feels good for the fun of it. A character centred around destruction is pretty entertaining to visualise, after all. The writing in and of itself is good, as there is not much to criticize in terms of grammar and spelling, but alas the earlier chapters have a few pacing mishaps. The storytelling works for those who like simple OP characters who fit their titles of grandeur.
As someone who had read this beta, I can tell that you all are not prepared for what is about to come in the future. The author also liked to play with people's minds and I love that about them
God f-ing dammit. Why did I stumbled upon this miraculous masterpiece. If not for this masterpiece, I moght not have been inpatient enough to destroy my phone because of waiting for this release. Just release 100 more chapters. This masterpiece is too short
Hi guys, Author here. I am shamelessly rating my own novel.Well that aside, Everyone should know that i will release this Novel's chapters only on weekend.Chapters ranging from 2 - 4 BUT if i have time then 'maybe' more and if i have less time then….. i will hardly be able release 2 much less more. So i hope you all wont be angry with me and also this my first novel so there are bound to mistake. For those, please forgive me. But i will try to minimize them as much as possible
Well, what I will hope that his training arc doesn't become too draggy and long. Because his nature is usually like perverted, so it is awkward thinking a child doing stuff like that. Well it will be all right, after this arc is over. The story has potential and best of luck to the author. Hope he doesn't not lose his motivation for writing like other original story writers.