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this is so good, i cant stop reading ❤️❤️❤️
Another Pokemon story? Automatic 5* and will read and unlock. Onto the next and I hope it is another pokemon story!I hope this get selected!
Really good besides the writing quality which is quite poor............................................,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,
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It's a good book
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
Lord I give you my heartI give you my soulI live for you aloneEvery breath that I takeEvery moment I'm awakeLord have Your way in me
When I'm searching it in MTL it has low reviews because they said that it copied "everyone returnee" Chinese version which is true but I hope that it get picked because this kind of novel vibe and setting is I like the most!Sorry for wrong grammar.
Hormonal **** who saves a girl in a f*cking game as a monster, becomes her slave as a "after sale reward" but he's just a p*ssy, MC legit has all the cliché bad things happening to him, girl friend breaks up with him for his bully, gets bullied because he looked at rich kids girl or smt, suddenly his dad has to pay a debt in a week but he can't afford it, father suffering an illness, etc. This is legit the most cliché stuff you can find on this site, it's honestly would be parody if they didn't take themselves so seriously. A wasted novel.
Hi, have the following comments and hence dropping it as it is different than what I initially thought. 1. The MC is shown has smart and cautious character, but he is anything but that. In fact many times, he just acts like a madman and then tries to justify the action through some reasoning. Maybe the author intends it to be this way, but this is not my cup of tea. For instance, he goes way back to the capital to save his friend from people with too high cultivation, when he could have intercepted and saved him whilst he was escorted to the capital. And in the end, the friend dies. .2. The MC is shown to be smart, learned and talented with amazing comprehension. But when he wants to unlock a storage ring which is usually through sense/qi/blood, he goes to a competitor and owes him a favour for telling him to use blood to open the ring. 3. The brotherhood of the MC and dog is very forced. Usually the development of such bond between the characters should be smooth and felt by the readers, but here the author just keeps on harping about friendship every other paragraph for many chapters to come.