RykerBale
I really love the whole concept of it , especially the biblical history please keep it up the story is really interesting and cool . Authour just needs to work on the punctuation that's all but the writing is top notch.?
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This book REALLY needs someone more fluent in English proofing it. Great concept for the book, but the language makes it very difficult to continue reading.
When is this break going to be over. I’v been waiting for months now?u200d♂️
so basically my work is to translate it correctly so that you can understand it and read it easier ........................................ credits to the rightfull owner.....................
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IN THE END I DIDNT DO ANYTHING IM SO STUPID!!!
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
I really like where the story is going so far, and hope the author doesn't ever drop!Wordfillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
I really enjoyed reading this book but it's a shame that it will never be completed by the person who wrote it ???????????????????
You can do better, Let's keep trying! YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT YOU CAN D IT
Wow! I am very surprised to see a novel of such high quality posted to this site from an author who's first language isn't English. It must have been very difficult to write such quality chapters given the fact that you are actually a potato with no arms, legs, eyes, or a brain. If you don't believe me then give it a read. You won't find another novel of this quality everyday! BTW, my PayPal is: [email protected]. please send me the 5$ you promised for this review.
