Alright, let me start off with some deserved praise. The story is good, I almost got hooked to it. The plot is heading in a very interesting way, and you did a good job building a not-so-cliche background of the protagonist/s. The pacing is good, each chapter gets you somewhere. The humor in this novel is also just right beside my taste.HOWEVER,the character design is too forced, the way they converse is too robotic and stiff. They have no feelings at all, the mc can even be considered as a repugnant douche with how he deals with things, although I don't particularly hate that kind of mc.The world building is too poor. The details are absolutely non-existent. Up until now, I have no idea what the mc looks like, that Jessica girl, and that Golden boy. Like, they just exist there, they do not have a single spoon of appearance or expression.And to top it all, the grammar is not even on an average level. There are too many newbie mistakes even in the synopsis itself. Let's take the scene where Jessica was being dramatic in front of the mc:"In the first moment she tried to resist, and even landed a few punches and slaps in his body. But after seeing that struggling was futile, she just accepted the facts and enjoyed the moment."How the f*ck can you punch and slap 'IN' someone's body.Using a little common sense would surely fix that problem, but that's not the point.Anyway, that's it for my review.IMPORTANT TO TAKE NOTE, I have no grudges with you and I don't hate your novel or whatsoever. I came here to review, not to kiss someone's ass despite their faults.Good job so far on your first novel. Keep writing and good luck.
Whoa... creative writerAnyways, the story captivated me from the synopsis itself. And the start made me read more. The way you started with colors was really interesting. Eager to read more. Great work!! Keep it up :)
The first 49 chapters are intersting and, I liked the progress of the chracters and the pace of the story.But can't read chapter 50 and onwards because it is only the previews, hope that can be fixed soon as posible, would like to read the rest of the chapters.
I don't understand why it is so difficult for authors to write normal synopsis. First of all, the name of the story didn't clarify anything concerning the story, then there is the synopsis that does the same, the author spends more words complaining and explaining his writing style and character design than explaining anything meaningful. Synopsis is meant to be a short description of the content of the book, not a prologue.
Just started. Only read a few chapters . But I am already thinking of dropping it. The grammar is horrible. And from the comments I have seen, the author hasn't hired an editor or done anything to fix this for the last 8 months. For those not bothered by horrible grammar give it a try. For me, it's a deal-breaker.
Really great novel I am having fun reading it and hope it continues because I have been looking for a new novel for a while and finally found one
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HIDDEN GEM!STORY BUILDING -So far the story setting are great.It is going slow but okay since as the author mentions that it's going to be a long one(if he doesn't drop it and please don't it's harder to find good story with an overused plot).CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT- Going good so far the MC has a sarcastic personality and laid back attitude, that's what I got from him since he basically just a child nowWRITING QUALITY- Excellent writing quality with simple yet descriptive sentences.The novel has a lot of humour with a lot of unexpected references that can make you crack up.WORLD BUILDING - Going fine since the mc is still a baby and is reincarnated after 3000 years.And author has done a good work in making it as real as it could be done in a fantasy novel?FINAL JUDEMENT : A unique writing style that keep u hooked on with a unique plot setting ......u get what I mean right.If the author doesn't drop it midway then it's going to be an amazing novel.okay goodbye?
1 Star Bc romance and polygamy is retarded so like yea. This is gonna be one of the trial read novels I won’t read, no harem at all and no romance ever.