Me encanta esta novela es una de mis favoritas tiene un buen desarrollo y exelente traducción los protagonistas son mis personajes favoritos
I'm going to leave an honest review here for any new readers that are looking for a story with the best world building, greatest character development, and the finest dialog you've ever seen.This story... has all those things, but you need to give it some time. Character development starts around chapter 70, and the world building isn't really satisfying till around the same chapter.However, to those who do give it a chance, thank you and please support this story in any way you can. I think it has some interesting arcs the later the story gets, and hope you all enjoy it :)
Another very well written story by Skully. good worldbuilding, character development and writing tone contribute to a great novel. The system aspects are also very well balanced so that they add to the story, rather than taking away.
Well, I'm not good at giving reviews. How the author wrote the story was good even there are some mistakes but it still provided sufficient information to visualize the story. The story is very interesting :)
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Story Development 0/5*SPOILERS*. MC playing a game to get money cause he eats a lot and his wife needs a second job to feed his lazy ass. Character Design 0/5Author can't utilize his characters, keeps making empty characters that have no purpose. All antagonist characters are the casual trash talking for no reason character that you see in every bad novel.Idiot genius and overly powerful MC who trains his martial arts (he is already at the top there is no training in this novel). If he wasn't constantly saying that he is a martial artist we wouldn't be able to see it for ourselves, he can't remain calm and he always fight to short his troubles.World Building 0/5Too many inconsistencies. Author states on thing and he immediately changes his mind.Some examples:1) Author says in chapter 17 that since players were around level 10, MC has an area that spawns mobs over level 20 as his "personal playground" because no parties would go and farm there. In the same chapter we see a group of 16 looking to hunt a 45 level Boss at the spot MC was farming.2) He has a whole chapter (ch7) on some guys wanted to rob the MC. Author states that in REBIRTH players upon death wouldn't lose experience points but only their equipment. In the whole chapter author gives us the feeling that if MC dies he would have his items + gold stolen.Later on we see that even if someone dies he wouldn't lose items necessary (ch19) . Further into the story, we see a "friend" of MC getting ganged by a group. Afraid of losing his 10% exp he shouts for MC to come to rescue (cp21). So author changes his world to make some events work that wouldn't if he was true to his words. Overall score TRASH/5 , would read again!...:3..-:^)-.-.-.-:P--:3-.--:P-..:D..:')-.-.xD-.-
I generally don't read cultivation novels but this novel attracted my attention. I would like to keep it spoiler free so this is the only thing I can say: READ IT NOW!
Website : qidian chinaViews : 10.06millionRating : 9.0(377)Chapters : 870+Status : ongoing Word count : 2.36millionauthor level : great No of works : 2Disscussion : 20350Year started : 2017Chinese title : 白银霸主Previous work : castle of black iron
Plot= full of holesCharacters = inconsistent and doesn't make any senseWriting quality= full of grammatical errors borderline low grade writing
Really liking the story so far, premise is genuinely good and makes me want to read more into the novel. A single question if you don't mind though. Is it a harem?
I don't Evan know what to say becaus I have never done a review before nor have I Even read these book I am literally only doing this for exp but unlike those over exp wana be's I am a true elder of the exp sect for when I go for exp through typing comments or reviews atleast I make it intresting instead of just typing exp and if you are still reading this than I would like to thank you for your time and remember these wise words. there is allways time to read, just do it before you go to sleep
All about cats. Very biased. Dogs are used in unfavorable situations like bad owners or no one wants them jokes.Translation team is not working together maybe. They keep changing character names.The mc knows nothing and never try to understand anything about the situation or the game or anything important. He survive via plot armor alone. The characters are illogical, shallow, narrow minded, full of jealousy, manipulative, insecure, hypocritical, self righteous, gossipers, the list goes on. Their beliefs are generally stupid and they act like SJWs. They are the type of people anyone with a working brain would stay away.Very inaccurate representation of higher class people.