I believe the story is quite good but the world lore should be explained a bit more as that would lay quite a good foundation for the later chapters. Overall, I find the story quite good.
This is my first novel and am planning on more than 15 chapters a day. I hope you guys enjoy the story and give a good review on my story. Thanks for reading.
Just want to let you guys know that the author personally told me that if you guys really want it (and riot about it) he will add harem to the novel. Just leaving this here in case someone is interested *whistles while walking away*.
I wasn’t there for the beginning but when I started reading I fell in love with it. It is in my top 5 favorite stories of all time, topping most of the books I’ve read.
The novel itself piqued my attention to read more because it was written rather effectively. The general point of view was the one thing that did slightly perplex me. Why does that matter? However, aside from that, it was a good novel; keep up the good job.
great work bro keep it up and lead us to a good end in the storyi have recommended you work to my friends they will also see it .I am pleased after reading this story
Can someone tell me the age of the teacher cuz if she if the diff is big it’s gonna be wierd for me
Another decent story ruined by a braindead MC. He eats a plant which only has a 5% chance of not killing or crippling the consumer, and he survives. Yay! He's not doomed anymore! He can slowly work on his cultivation, enter a good University, and- oh. He just ate two more of that plant.
I'm wondering as to why the crown prince was killed. After reading it, I become inquisitive and addicted.next.... ?❤?
By the standards of this site, it's good. Here's some more text to so I can hit the minimum character count to post this review. Blah blah blah.
pretty good so far (ch10)............…......
It's kinda petty of me ngl but I like the idea of the book and the only reason it is not a 4 star is because of my view. When he chose his class I just find it unacceptable what he chose. The classes are ranked from the rarity. So the general d,c,b,a,s rank etc He had the chance to chose an s rank but didn't? Like I'm sorry what? How monumentally stupid do you have to be to not chose the best class you can? Like even a child knows what would be better to choose... It's just such bullsht to me. The whole reason is he doesn't want to be a gambler... but then it's a game. It's not real. I like the class joker but with the better class, it just leaves a horrible taste in my mouth. It's someone who asks you to pick between copper or gold. EVERYONE would choose gold but in this story he chose copper... So yeah gl to author