highly recommended , don't miss to read this
The novel is so unapologetically fast and tight with its writing. Constantly moving, wants to show more and it never felt rushed. This flow state is addictive and just like that, you're chapters deep and you haven't noticed. You'll root for the characters, trust me.
This has great potential and thanks from me for the huge amount of chp
Honestly its subpar writing....story had potential but it just wasnt developed well. The MC and his interactions seem forced...they dont feel natural. MC is too naive, too beta, too awkward and just not confident. I mean he has the most beautiful wife but he cant hold a conversation with other women easily. He keeps asking can I hug you, can i kiss you? and it feels too stupid when she has already shown him that its okay....I mean wife keeps helping him grow but he lacks ambition. You cant feel drive from him to grow etc. She tells him to read and gain knowledge but it didnt show him doing that...honestly story is not written well. Around chapter 75 I just couldnt anymore
where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes
I found this was a pretty neat boom at first. Tried reading it, grammar isn't the best but it's understandable most of the time, not all the time. The plot seems to be extremely vague, MC's personality change between his death and reincarnation get glossed over, the interactions feel forced, fake, drawn out. the characters are pretty forgettable, and the 'emotional' moments just aren't. made it to chapter 26 until the story was completely lost on me. Stuff that seems like it should've been a big deal happened like it wasn't.
Best novel I've read this year, a perfectly paced weak to strong progression and great plots.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
This is my all time favorite novel, Just wish it would UpdAte more.........(/6:$:!:;&:!:$;!:!:&:$!:&:&:&:&:’:&:&:&:&:&:’:!,&,&:’:&;&:&&:&:&:&:&:
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I suffered through three chapters of this before skipping to later chapters to see if the MC gets any smarter. The answer is no, he does not. He’s a compete idiot. Some idiot MCs are likeable, but this one is not. Reading this is an exercise in frustratipn. I recommend not wasting your time on this one.
Interesting so far, time skips only months for now and solid Cultivation system as the author describes every level, though it gets pretty confusing when it comes to the mc's realm of qi and body . If anyone knows the novel's raw name please share.
It’s a bit bittersweet for me that this finally being updated on webnovel, considering i just finished reading the mtl that was completed. Still an amazing novel and ill definitely give it a re-read once more chapters are out.