i like the novel and the story line i hope it will be continue translating until the end,it's worth your time and writing quality & translation quality are quite good
IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT MOUNT TAI ORIGINIF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT WHY CAN'T HUMANS ON EARTH CULTIVATE IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT ORIGIN OF YELLOW EMPEROR (WELL HALF IS ACCORDING TO AUTHOR HALF CHINESE MYTHOLOGY STILL....ITS AMAZING) ITS AN CULTIVATION NOVEL MC IS GOOD NOT MANY CLICHES WELL 4.6 CAUSE IT WAS ON GRAVITY TALES NOW HERE SO DON'T KNOW THE TRANSLATION QUALITY AND CHP PER WEEK HOPE ITS GOOD
Raw: 模拟器：开局天赋软饭硬吃Author: Braised StoneCategory:Fantasy NovelsStatus: Chapter 242 (Ongoing)Definitely worth the read. If you wanna read mtl, use chrome.
its good but kinda boring, and annoying i dont like the unnecessary question the mc ask. Also about how the system trying to conntrol the mc ????
I tried to really like this book cause everything but the stupid plot hole was great. English is great, descriptive writing is great, world background superb, character design super, but that stupid idiotic plot hole of """ I KNOW WHO YOU ARE AND I'M YOUR SUPER LOYAL RETAINER BUT FUCK YOU I WON'T TELL YOU FOR YOUR OWN GOOD""" plot hole is just too idiotic, juvenile and too dang overused. If you really think about that plot hole from any common sense angle it does way more harm than good and would've been better off as not being added from the start. It totally ruined the whole start and the whole book. Anyways gluck hope you don't add this kind of plot hole in the future. Totally ruined your great work. Just a really bad way to setup a book. The amnesia was already enough then i would've just sprinkled in bits of clues for him to do a self discovery of sort no need to add that stupid retainer. He was totally pointless to the plotline and only serve to demean the whole start of events. You could've used him to add emotional impact by having divulge some semi super important info being he got caught and then killed. Adding more questions than answers and furthering the plot deeper. Not that stupid i know who you are but I don't want to tell you bull****.
Thanks for writing out such an amazing book!! Just love the book the world building and characters is simply superb.. Hope you continue to write..
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I’m fully aware that as the story only has 18 reviews as of now, I’m bombing the review score. But at the same time, this story deserves nowhere near as much support as it seems to be getting. The concept is great and I love it, but the execution the author used is terrible. And yes, it’s the author’s first time writing but... that’s not an excuse to just ignore what readers are trying to say. In fact. The author is blatantly disregarding all the comments about the typos and spelling mistakes, or the story’s absolutely terrible grammar. Which, by the way, the story is littered with. Sorry, but I can’t support this train wreck. But here’s a promise, I’ll come back and fully support the novel of the author gets the story back together. Likely quite a few chapters need fully rewriting to make the grammar readable but trust me author... it’s well worth the cost. Props to the author for choosing to write, though.
I don't remember much as I read it long time ago and I thing I only read it like 20-50 chapter so u can say this is not a review but my deep shit frustration to this novel.1) mc is a dumb ass bitch mother fucking 0 iq appshit.why? because he want to be strong and unlike some dick green head in some anime he actually work hard.and he got a good monster as price.now you all thing that's genuinely a good mc as he hard work and strives for what he wants right?no he reject the monster For stupid silver sparrow.now I don't know if this sparrow is transformed to some mighty phenoix or not in later chapter.but from what I remember this sparrows is the thotest thot a sparrow can ever be.she act like a queen but we all know she a bitch.if anything I will bitch slap that sparrow and drill it into the mc's ass.2)what ever shit mc do he won't make any progress.i mean he actually gets strong superfast in some deep macho art that require being a masochist.but even after it he can't beat any bitch.more over he is in some deep shit relation with the sparrow I thing as he is a beta mc who actually get trolled by a freaking sparrow.not any heroine (if he got any.the way this story going he will gets ntred for sure)but a freaking sparrow.its like he won't even have a courage to **** a sparrow and teach her the place she belong but alas mc has dick that's smaller than a sparrows ass.3)the whole world is weird for me.like the whole world is trying to NTR mc.you will get this feel when you read.like how much good he is on something but nobody cares.at the sametime some rich kid tried some half ass shit then here you go the genius of the century.like the world is trying to prove that mc is some mc of an hentai NTR manga.i don't like that wibe at all.4)did I talk about the sparrow?she is a bitch a bitch that is born from bitch,for a bitch and all the bitch.by the bitch ,to the bitch and all the bitch English word could muster.and worst of all she can't even be usefull as a bitch.
The novel that was so awesome it got me reading all of qidian translated novel.. story wise the novel is awesome with its OP mc that doesn't really stand out to much , and characters that are likable . Has misunderstandings that make lol as much as the other guy. More realistic kind of tackling the world I think compared to other hot blooded transmigrated mc out there that kills anyone that wrongs them. Can't wait for more chapters . ????
This book sounds really interesting but it is the second one what's the name of the first book?
Nate should not be with Vivan