I really like the flow of the plot so far. I find each chapter interesting and the suspension keep building. Also the fact that the female lead is strong even though she is in a wheelchair is a powerful message.
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The story is really really good >.< makes me really thrilled...I hope it updates soon...I'm really looking forward for it???Although...I really can't breath when reading the part where they're being chased by monsters or bikers....and I still doubt Jim...
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I think this novel was on gravity tales and had more than a hundred or two hundred chapters already. Anyway, this novel has all the cliches I find annoying in Chinese novels.The novel has a mc who becomes a *** crazed maniac in less than 100 chapters, he has Captain America level of powers in normal earth, kills people for whatever reason(Some delinquents were harassing a harem member. He wanted to teach them a lesson and ended up breaking someone's bone. He felt like it would cause trouble to him so he just killed them all instead. The guys didn't want to kill him or anything, they were just perverts verbally harassing a girl...)This story is pointlessly nationalistic(Author mentions China superiority in places nobody really cares) and author doesn't know about foreign countries that much, so every foreigner is a stereotype. All mexicans are drug gangs here, American girls are really "open
So I am here trying to give myself a review after reading up to the latest chapter. Let's start first with the writing quality, I'm very well aware of how the story's transition turned out pretty decent. The way the author writes the story is pretty clean and concise, enough for the readers to immediately hook up and immersed in the story without any hurdles. I think this is the greatest benefit you get away with every game system novel. With this kind of strength in your hands, you can reveal an adequate amount of show-not-tell and vice versa. The Updates have been pretty consistent, as I can see with the publishing dates of the chapter, that's even more than one. That's more than what I can ask for. Please keep it up.The story development: I'd say that I love the premise especially the "Government". Whether we like it or not, it's always some shady business over there. It's actually decent and not a far-fetched idea. This kind of administration will always F up some characters and this moves me to the next question.With the character design, we can see the glimpse of Alex, despite his beliefs of the heroes, found himself in a predicament and only to be shattered by the dark side of it. But his strong sense of justice had what kept him from moving forward. I pray that he'll because the superhero where today's youth had lost hope on believing one.With the world background, this is just the beginning and its kind of understandable that world-building is tedious and takes time to form. We just witnessed how Alex is transported to another world after the verge of death. Right now, I'm just seeing the bud that had just germinated. I'm very optimistic that it'll grow as abundant as the flora in the garden of Eden.Keep it up! I hope for the very best in this WPC!
Poor,naive,typical,waste time ,predictable,boring,IQ5 ..................................................................................................
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
The stories you’ve started are all well written! I enjoyed reading them! Though I would feel disappointed each time it moved onto the next story, I got immersed into the next one soon after! If you ever decide to continue/finish any of them, I’d definitely come back to read them!Updating stability and story development are only lower due to not completing the stories, otherwise I’d rate five stars for everything.
Oh well, what can I say, I like my novel a lot and I recommend it to everyone :DBook 2 (chapter 45 onwards) is probably much better than the first. Cherry and I really worked hard on it and tried to fix the inconsistencies in book 1. I really hope we will be able to deliver the paperbook in the next weeks. It will be available on amazon.com We have a lot of italian readers but I really look forward to see how our novel will fare in the international stage. Have a good read!
One of my favorite novels just from reading the first few chapters. I hope it gets to be a story with 500+ chapters because I will be supporting this story wholeheartedly as long as it pumps out more chapters.