Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher. W W W I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds
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For me, after reading 20 chapters, it's good novel. I voted for it for 2 reasons:1) Genre about VRMMORPG with returning to the past2) the other novel had name and cover that whould love females, but not males.P.S.: and I think those females are angry, as they lost in voting.)
Let me start off by saying that i really like the premise of this story and the characters in it. the only issue i have is with the author making everything vague and even saying it will remain that way because this is basically a side story of her published book. Now i took a look at the book but it didnt interest me because the MC is a woman and i only like reading male lead stories. This is really sad because i really think this could have been one of the greats if it was just treated as its own book rather than a side story. There aRe decent grammatical and spelling errors which are off putting and the structure of the chapters suck at times since there are no inidcatuon of time passage or author notes at the end of the chapter like you see with other novels. Sadly im dropping this after 106 chapters. it was fun while it lasted.
The story is good( chap 48) its mtl but it s not that bad. MTl gives brain damage and this one just feels like bad human translation which passable for me because the story is that good. I recommend u do the same thing i did: there are 64 properly translated chaps on other sites( quick google search and u ll find it). I read the chapters with good translation first to get a good understanding of the novel and that helped me understand the mtl easier. Thank me later if it work for you ?
The concept was not bad. It was actually pretty enjoyable. But the translation and wording is all over the place. Some chapters have really bad grammar usage. Power system was not properly introduced and defined properly. Cliche and boring plot. The words of the characters are basically the same. World background is very lacking in details too. All in all, it's okay to read but don't expect to enjoy the novel. The quality of the novel is below average but there aren't really many novels of this type so it's a bit acceptable
Super Generic, i don't know why people vote this
read smth else don't consume trash because u can't find any good novels anymore
I've seen dense MCs, I've seen stupid naive MCs. I've seen obsessively idiotic MCs. But this MC takes the stage above all other BETA MCs. And he is actually the fkng alpha. Nice premise and good background story. I don't know why but the author turned this MC so dense he cannot even understand his beard was never liked by the females even if they say it in face. Wow, talk about living in denial so much. Tunnel vision is heavy in this guy.
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Interesting concept, with a mediocre execution. The core concept of a master that has to pick and raise his disciples is fairly good. Nothing too original, but fun nonetheless.The excessive exposition and focus on banality make this novel hard to read though. So while the core concept remains fairly is interesting and fun, you'll have to keep skimming and skipping through the text to get to the actually interesting bits. Characters also aren't very interesting. As said above, the story is told mostly through introspection and exposition. Leaving very little room for actually interesting character interactions. There are some good/fun this here and there, but there is just too little of it. Characters all remain very flat and interactions often times don't feel quite natural.I wouldn't recommend reading this, unless you really love stories with a lot of exposition, a very slow pace and with excessive amounts of detail. If you're into that, go for it. Otherwise skip this one.
Name: 永恒武道Author: 月中阴 Lv.5Chapters: 1974(4.36 million words)Status: Completed