I haven't read much but so far it's a pretty enjoyable story, I hope the author keeps posting regularly and finishes the story.I saw that he has some stories that have not been finished yet, I hope he is not the kind of author that drops his stories.
I really like stories like this, I hope you have more frequent updates from now on, thanks for the hard work to the author, translator and editor, and everyone involved.
Author builds up the world and universe around the characters. Action leads to development of characters. Leaves the universe large enough to create side stories or novels based in the same universe.
This is an absolute novel. From characters in this novel to the power level and lore, everything is built perfectly and not rushing while also not making the arcs too long. With reasonable timeskips and especially the factor of keeping the characters not forced, nor shallow and making each character interesting with their own personality
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please make your synopsis more understandableI'm not going to read it because I don't understand the synopsis. you can say that I judge quickly but I don't have time to read a book which has a synopsis where we are not given any information about the mc
advantages :1_the writing quality is good 2_ the story isn't fast-paced with too op character 3_the world background is acceptabledisadvantages 1-the main character intelligence is trash on par with greed from overheard no no even greed is more creative than him 2_main character is supposed to be top 40 or something gamer but the way he use the ability is find limited and there is no creativity 3_the author force the story by making main character doesn't use his status although he is facing powerful organization that_as author described_ can take small nation by a bat and human strength with some ****y abilities and a mask so I dropped it not my cup of tea at least greed was humorous this doesn't deserve more that 3 stars
Great novel keep it up author.Also I like your other novel so update that too...............................................................
shit translation dont read it walking down a streen looks like a "nice" bloodsucking vampire dont read it and also translator can you stop translating because you do a shit job
Looking forward to more chapters!!! ?????
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Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential