CosmicCeaser
This story is one of my favorite, it very relaxing book where I alway enjoy reading it new chapter. So I encourage you to do the same and read it?
hello, this is my first book, and my current plans for Alex Muller have for yet been fully decided, so I hope you will join me in the creation
F uuck... How long are you going to make us wait for the next chapter? I have read this for 2weeks now beginning to last over and over. I just want to say, Nice piece of work.. X1000 to the 1000 power.
amazing book by an amazing writer!♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Although this book is still just short. It's got potential. I've read the first few chapters and had a good laugh while I'm at it. I will watch this book's growth with great interest. Congrats on your second book, author-san!
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Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Very interesting story. And very addicting too .like I had to stop myself and review.I'm not usually a fan of fantasy but this book has changed my whole perspective
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This had some potential but it feels like you wrote yourself into a corner at the very beginning with the MC being given an incredibly powerful ability. Which leads to you having the MC overlook obvious ways of getting stronger simply so something in the immediate future remains a threat. It also doesn't help that you make the MC incredibly inconsistent in terms of goals and personality. For example, in the beginning the MC is new to the world, possesses a skeleton and enters the nearest town with the goal of remaining low profile and learning about this new world and its dangers, as in who and what to be wary of. He finds a book store, buys all the relevant literature and decides its no long an immediate concern to read them and goes for a stroll... in a body, he already noted attracted attention due to the chilling feel it gave to those nearby. He happens upon an auction, the items of which are mostly sold to a man who is clearly rich and powerful in status as he not only bids high but no one dares bid higher and chance offending him. That is until the last 'item' a slave. Now, it should be mentioned that before the MC even entered this town he came across a bandit camp with slaves, as can be imagined horrible things were done to the slaves and he killed all the bandits as well as mercy killed one of the slaves who endured too much. As for rest despite his anger (which he shouldn't be feeling as X sealed it) he doesn't help them, he just leaves. Back to the auction, the 'item' is revealed as a beautiful demon-girl slave, he doesn't know her story, he has no reason to care for her in any way but for reasons, she gains his attention and he decides to buy her... to gather information... he then keeps doubling the bid of the rich and powerful royal until he wins for a total of 2 million gold. I feel like I should repeat that his goal before all this was to lay low and learn about the world and he keeps flip-flopping like this throughout the novel. In the end he feels less like a character and more like a plot device, he's whatever you want him to be at any given moment so you can drive the story in your desired direction, regardless of his personal history or personality.I can also get into story pacing but I think I'll stop here or this is going to get ridiculously long.
I dont know how to express what i feel about reading this novelAll I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....? Ignore my review
The story begins with our main character betting on having potential to be a sorcerer, and having the bet pay off. Some world building ensues, but as of CH15 the power levels and power progression systems are still a bit fuzzy. The characters are interesting but fairly one dimensional, although in fairness there hasn't been much chance to develop them yet. The story recently took a twist which seems to embark into a much more ruthless path than what was originally set. I'll update this review as necessary.So far I set updating stability at 5/5, since it's fairly early and I think giving people the benefit of the doubt is necessary. I'll also update that as we keep getting releases.
