This is one of the best mafia books I have read
how many chapters are left?
have you started Meadow story already?
????beautiful story????
It’s really good
I couldn't get past the first chapter. writer can't decide if writing in third person or from POV. Terrible grammar, and confusing as writer keeps confusing him for her or her for him or his. ugh. terrible.
Excellent.
when are you going to update new chapters please update soon please
I love all your books. This one blew me away. Very imaginative and unpredictable. So much character growth and not one sided. I look forward to your next book!
71 chapters 2-4-23
The scenes are hot, intense and something new! The tension between the characters keeps me on edge. The lines and the emotions are all on point! I love this!
Really enjoyed this. I binged through all available chapters and even bought the author's patreon to read ahead.
This story doesn't do anything groundbreaking. The writing is simple, and my jaw was really never on the floor at any moments compared to some of the other higher rated works, so looking back I wonder why I was unable to put this book down.
I think a lot it has do with the pacing. Every chapter has a good sense of progression and the exposition is minimal. It is a slice of life, but there is still a good sense of progression. The fights are short and sweet. Arcs don't overstay their welcome. There is very little character drama, which keeps the focus on the MC and the quick pacing.
This feels like it was written for long term litrpg/cultivation readers who are starting to get sick of the genre. It just feels like a nice break from all the world ending high stakes, lengthy expositions, melodramatic characters, and other things that can drag down this genre sometimes.