ChaoticReaderCy2
No it's not BL
i have stop reading this novel before now want to read again but i forgot the chapter number.
en realidad en prota eh un hombre de cabello plateado
Mc is a novel author o.o
Hello!! where did you get the link for this chapter?
I agree with the first commenter. The story has changing character names, numerous typos, and mixed-up pronouns. The translation is not great, but it's better than machine translation. The story's pace is decent, and overall, I enjoyed it. It's my first time encountering a story where all four characters are reincarnated, with three males and one female lead. The female lead also undergoes transmigration. However, I found it occasionally boring and noticed inconsistencies in their character development. For instance, they're powerful but don't always use their abilities effectively. There's a point where I dislike the male lead for wanting to hurt the female lead to prevent her death, which is ironic.
Saying what i think everyone is thinking, the book is pretty much a fanfic of demonic sword. While there are differences in the small details that change the ways things happen the plot points are almost exact same to the point where i already know what's going to happen.Spoilers: Both bad fathers, both picks up mentors a smithing mentor who dies for them, both pick up an initial mentor to start off who gets surpassed and dies for them, both mother kills themselves to not restrain son, both kill abusive sibling and run, both go an academy and dominate as a rare darkness cultivator, both flee the mainland as trouble hits to go join a hidden darkness set, both darkness set patriarchs are looking for a dark inheritor, both Mc's act really similar in mannerisms, both end up having a Op transformation that ends up being a trump card, the list just goes on and on and its just tiring how similar they are.
one word: .................................
why did you delete and repost it , it was great anyway
well , to this point of the story, this is the best one among the tial novels and even among the current translating ones. a good novel to this point.
This is really mediocre at best, lack of other reviews make me think the author deleted the bad ones.There are so many forced plot points that the story just feels disjointed.Somehow the person who the MC took over actually loved the male lead but decided to act like she only cared for the money? And then the male lead also loved her as well? And he's also a leader of the special forces who couldn't track the MC despite her not doing anything to hide her tracks. They then also investigated the MC's apartment in search of the MC as a cat but somehow didn't realise the MC owns the apartment despite them looking for her?The writing quality is nice at least.
Chapter 20 so far looking forward to more. High level of depravity and harem stealing other people's women or taking other people's mothers, better than that only if future daughters enter the harem hehe great potential.
