Chilong's hand reached forwards to her head. His thumb and middle finger formed a ring as it hovered gently in front off her forehead.
"Lie ... Don't ..."
Even though everyone else had already eaten breakfast, the smell of melted cheese, butter, and cooked eggs was particularly mouth-watering today. But Robin had only made enough for her and Christian. Thus, she ignored the stares of those around her. After all, Ponzu knew the recipe now, too, so they could just ask him.
Pathetic. That is the perfect statement to describe Lu Yan's condition right now.
1. Characters are sloppy. Main character in particular can't seem to control himself and the author's portrayal of him is shaky as **** as his character changes from chapter to chapter, going from unsteady in one chapter to professional assassin in another with no foreshadowing. Similarly, plot line forces MC to make MANY MANY STUPID decisions for him to end with "I need to learn how to do xxxx better next time." Guess what happens when next time comes. It horribly idiotic and it never stops even after 200 chapters. Other characters are more consistent, but that has more to do with they being 1 dimensional rather than author's abilities. 2. word selection by author is awkward and the way they address each other can get on your nerves. 3. Story development is also non-existent. MC has little to no goals other than to graduate from academy and presumably slack off somewhere. His character however does not match as he can suddenly get hot blooded, suddenly fiery, and then regret once the fight is over because he showed off too much. Note that this does not change and he continues to do stupid things to show off repeatedly to no benefit whatsoever.
if this is just like another female mc, its gonna be like, - a few first chapters : good - better- but will drop in quality as the story goes..- the chapter will be too short, and it will like you really waste a jewel to skip the add before reading the short chapters- the mc will be a female bad ass op who will stand at the top of every man except the male mc who chases her like crazy, which is i like the most in this type of novel, all hail the female mc- if u really are a fan of that kind of novel this will be a perfect choice...
i really like it ... (u2060~u2060￣u2060³u2060￣u2060)u2060~ update more
Hmm this novel is unique, because you either love it or hate it, after reading like 90 chapters I can with confidence say that it makes no sense.Hear me out, the story idea is honestly pretty good, but the writing is very erratic that has no real string to tie things together, couple that with mediocre grammar, it’s not unreadable it’s just confusingI feel like it takes something plays with it for a bit and then forget or scrap it completely, the constant jumps between timelines are a fine idea but it’s almost every chapter, sometimes to some random characters which aren’t really relevant to the storyI will most likely drop it as it’s a bit too much of a mess for me. Regardless keep writing bud
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The story is off to a great start, and the characters are well-written. I love the content of the story, and I am excited to keep reading! Good job!
wow, this story is really interesting. About someone who wants to be strong. l I hope Arjun can fulfill his wish. Hopefully. Arjun fighting!!
Una buena novela, muy interesante.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------