Excellent work, Errors are few to even be found. With the few chapters I've read I've been proved that the book has great potential.
Unclear starting point make confused very much. Mc doesn’t seem to have a freedom in development. The novel also shows me how unfriendly, disdain, strict the military to the weak. Only order no negotiation. This is what I understand after dozen chapters.
I like this novel, the start was a type of clinch everyone likes! This novel has great potential. i hope it had more chapters! we need more chapters!!
I am very curious about the existence of Jena.where is he? every paragraph of your novel story makes me curious to re-read further information. plot twist is cool. every sentence you write makes readers think hard to find answers to unanswered questions from readers. Really cool novel in my opinion. strong imagination. cheers bro
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read it wrong also
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wondering why you still reading this
8. You see the mistake right? (on7)
10. But did you see I skipped number 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9
13. And did you see I skipped number 2
14. You got tricked
15. But did you see that I skipped number 12
16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this.
( You got tricked )
Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.
Its interesting, but could have had more comedy
Hi there everyone ☺️, I've been working on this book with the dream of a big future for it
A great story that scratches the apocalyptic itch with a great side of romance. The MC is F/M, but there is also a strong presence of yuri with there being 2 yuri couples and 2 f/m couples. I didn't think having most of the characters we follow in a relationship would be so good, I mean after thinking about it, it made sense. They only have each other so may as well enjoy it. It definitely doesn't feel like we are following one person's story, but it's the entire cast's story. We get the great highs of battle and then we get the slow interludes which also serve as ways for them to discover themselves as well as further their relationships. It feels like I am there with the squad experiencing the terrors of the world and laughing with them whenever they have a moment of rest.Overall give it a read, It has a bit of everything, so if you enjoy Yuri there is plenty of it and if you like F/M there is also something there for you. Love action there is plenty of arc of intense battles as well as mysteries being uncovered.
At first, I thought it'd be like those astral pet store and other store-type system books, but it was just a trashy face-slapping story. Honestly, don't bother reading it. Total waste of time.
I have to follow my predecessors‘ footsteps and give this book 5 stars overall. I read all of author‘s MMORPG novels and I can say only positive things about his writing style, his update frequency and his storytelling.Can’t wait for this story to progress and the final of the MMORPG saga to start ???
Hey there, just informing you guys that the new cover has been uploaded. Just saying that this cover is full of characters of the future, and current, and will not change for a long time since there characters will remain the most important in the novel for a long time