CozyCatCake
I couldn't even get through chapter 2 because of how awful this translation is. Webnovel is notorious for its horrible translations but usually they are handled ok the first 40 chapters. This one, clearly no editing has been done. It's horrible to read, don't bother or you're brain will turn to mush.
The description of the story is not too helpful in 'describing' the story but after reading few chapters I say it has potential.though some doubts is the mc 20 or 26 and is the cultivation world hidden or is publicly known.
This is , of course, a finished product written by a different author(SpacerX)...or, a couple million words coincidentally arranged in the same order.
Well...I'm here to support one of my favorite authors here on the Webnovel. This is another one of his work so i already know this is going to be good. Although this is a eastern fantasy novel with cultivation in this but at least it's different from most of the brain-dead cultivation novels which are present everywhere. The ML is not some naive character with some hero-complex, so this is a plus for me. And obviously since this a cultivation novel...the plot runs deep!!!....to know more about the characters and the plot do read the story.
MC is gonna become a Villain...........Truly gonna be a epic story, can't wait :_: ..................Another OP MC.
I Am really gonna love this story I a sure of it....................
this is pure crap he says stuff at the begging that we dont know **** about and by the time he has explained them hehe we wont even remeber what happened in the begining i didnt even bother to read too much please dont upload these crappy novels and start uploading chapters for some worth novels!
SUMMARY is a BAIT
MC can summon BOSS monsters
BUT in a sealed state. The attributes are 10% or less of a boss monster and will unlock as MC increases his level.
That's okay but the Summoner Job is shown as Trashy and MC getting ridiculed is getting on my nerves.
Also, repeated mention of the BEAUTY of the MC is making it sound GAY... I am not into that....
Sorry to be so mean for my first review but I want the author to take conscience that his story is event more chidlish than my little poney. The mc has only one setbacks that he forgets in the first ten chapters that is his wife’s betrayal although the author could have used this to give the mc a more complex personality than « i love everyone, everyone is beautiful come with me pluck flower ». He could have used this to create a more complex relationship with lu and his friends. Like he doesn’t trust any women and is a perfect bastards until he finds the female lead.
The character of the stories are either here to help the mc either... Sorry there is only this sort of character.
The mc is born :
Rich (check)
In a lovely family (check, btw i love you lu)
With true friens (check)
With insane luck (check, if one day he goes in a forest i expect him to at least found a unicorn)
The things with stories with a system is that it makes all too easy there are no exterior problems that the mc won’t be able to take care of. So please create some real problem.
Well if you come this far atleast read 1 or 2 ch.
First of all do the author want to continue updating this novel or not. What I want was a constant updates of at least 5 - 7 chapters/week, cause lately there aren't any update on this novel. This kind of situation really piss me off.
Waiting on the rest of the book. Well be anymore update or can someone tell me where I can find the book other than here
The most lovable part of this book is the background story of the different characters. The build up is lit. Good job.
