Overall great but with a few flawswriting quality-Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good.Stability-For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back...story development-Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still.Character design-Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger.But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone.Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family (pure speculation)World Background-Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge.Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.
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Surprisingly not premium after the first few chapters. Qidan is notorious for going premium with no reason. Very surprised a new novel on here has 600+chapters. That alone makes me start asoing questions about where they come from. But, i read way the hell too much. Even if its an iffy source, i need the chapters to feed my addiction
This trash will be selected very fast for voting........Trash concepts Trash Mc????????????????????????????????
this book is pretty good it has a couple of problems mainly dealing with how fast the story progreses the characters are Aldo a little rushed it seems other than those couple of things I would recommend reading it. I would especially recommend it if it did not go premium by chapter 20 I would love to sit down and read this for a couple hours but there are not that many chapters yet so alas
A very good novel. I very much enjoyed reading this novel since the plot was good all the way till the end. The grammar didn't have any problems from what I could see, which is something I consider a must when reading...All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
hot garbagetook 5 chapters to reveal a top 20 rankingtrashmc is stupidthe plot is predictablevery average at best, absolutely horrible at worst
In my opinion the story and background is great, the mc has a unique system and the world building is good. The story overall is quite funny and the disciples all have interesting personalities
it goooooooooooooooooooooooooood nice stooorrryyy can't wait for to come everything superb hope there more to come thank for the story ???
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i don't know anymore.middle schoolers who can fight at a national level and are god archers.rapists who have already gone after the kids. middle school is 10 to 13guy killes 2000 skelles doesnt lv upkills a boss and gets 200 exp levels up 3 times.no one questioning the authority of a 13 year old
It was pretty good as a light-hearted comedy. Didn’t work too well as an action novel. Some jokes landed on me and made me laugh a bit, but some just weren’t funny to me. I’m at about the part where the MC takes over the gang. The action isn’t well described, but there wasn’t much to begin with. It’s all fine and dandy, but I’ve just read something like that so many times its just become bland to me. I can’t really say much else. It wasn’t executed especially well, or especially terrible. It was just average. Grammar and the like is near perfect, and story flows naturally. Synopsis is slightly clickbait, but that’s alright since it was entertaining nonetheless. One thing that bothers me is the lack of MC’s progress. His power level doesn’t increase at all from chp 1-50, and all he does is redeem some non-lethal skills. Although power progression isn’t the main focus of the novel, I feel like it should be important. With the current power progression, I feel like the story could go on for much longer than I would expect.