Read it,it gets really good..........................,.....................................................,,,,,,,...,........,..................
Hello Well the author finally did it .He has finally made the storyPretty good written till now and fore shadowing is nice. Well we just need to wait for an editor now to jumpstart things
Original and fantastic story...unusual relationship between detective and killer...the both of them are smart...the characters are not only transmigrators...alive or dead...they have chance go to the new world..everything is connected
I started reading it and I didn't expect it to be out of my expectation. the character, the antagonist was really my type, so cool. It was really out of my expectations. however, there is some point that I don't get it. ?
Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.
Very enticing begining. I look forward to reading about the Damon's secret. As always, everything is set in a beautiful, rich universe.
Hello everyone, I will be posting an update next week for \\"His symphony\\" I apologize that I had to keep you waiting for a long time I was caught up finishing the completion of \\"Teach me\\"
lovely book please update.
First, it was the synopsis that pulls me in. Then the book itself kept me hooked. This is one of the book I’ve read so far!! Kudos to the great work author!
Looks very interesting and exciting i just started reading it and I love it and im invested
Hi author, are you updating new chapter everyday? Is it 2 chapter or one? And usually in what time?
It was a good book but not how it ended.