In this review I want to say that I love that all the girls MC virgins, and not as in most novel that they fu**ed someone, and the author tries to show what a cruel world, or what he loves experienced, or he felt sorry for them, in a word, it does not explain, also MC is not stupid, does not let the enemies to gain strength until the end novely attacked him, there is a lot that I can say, but if you will be reading you understand me.Well anyways the AUTHOR of your novel one of the BEST to webnovel want to thank you for the excellent work ?, I also want to clarify a grammar chapters in the beginning and the end at the moment, I read 95 chapters and I can say that the author improves his grammar and creativity with writing, will also add *in novel too not much of mistakes there, all readable*. At the end of the review I want to recommend this novel for reading to all readers who will see this review?
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hello everyone! ?read this first. ?it's just a little warning and notes you need to take before you read: ?1. my grammar is not the best. you may even find it a frustrate read so you must hold your breath first before making a fuss ?2. this is the first book i've ever wrote so you may find many plot holes. but you can say so, so that i can do better next time ?3. the mc may appear stupid. he is talentless, not a genius. he is unlucky. even if he works hard, he just can't become stronger. and it all affected his behaviour so much ?4. the author needs help! your correction is a good thing. don't worry i will use your corrections well to improve. ?5. uhmmm.... and yeah! thanks for bothering yourselves reading this ?
Felt like readers are being herded to this by editors choice mark on trail read. And all the 5 star reviews. Don’t be mistaken, this novel is absolutely struggling to reach mediocre and escape from trash label. It’s not completely trash, u can read it as last resort in isolation. I mean you could be doing ANYTHING productive, but u can read this too. Ok, reasons: pairing up bro and sis? Ok, not blood related, but we’re grown up like them till his 18th bday. When parents are the ones pushing them together? No thanks. 2000 hrs in future, humans went galactic. And Chinese brought the cultural baggage with them all the way? The humour is not completely humour. Because it’s a Chinese novel trying to be Japanese with its strong mother, henpecked dad, beta MC, and Chinese elements. I rated it all 1 because the novel is rated too high for its worth and it needs to be brought down.