Honestly the number of things wrong with this story outnumber the mountains in Bhutan. The most important problem would be the lack of creativity. By reading just the first 10 chapters you can see this is like any other lord survival game which is released or featured bi-weekly. There has been no improved plot or any innovative or new aspects introduced to this type of book they constantly release.
Looking forward for the next upcoming chapters! consistency and patience are vital in one's success! Keep it up wkwkwkkwkwkwkwkwkwwkwkwkkwkwkwkw
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGENow, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!ADVICEEdits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes! ?
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I love it, just like RML and Omega Summoner! Very similar to Death and Me. I love the personality in the characters and the jokes are hilarious.;)
Yo Author where are more chapters ? ? ? ..................................................................................................
Isn't this the Japanese LN with the same name? If you didn't get legal permission from the publisher to post this here, I suggest you remove this ASAP. Remove it before anyone reports you.
It is very nice but a bit confusing as the god just throw the MC in his written world just because she rejected his story to be made into a movie and just what is happening to MC who just seems so strong hearted at the same time weak.
I absolutely love this so far it seems like a mix of all my favorite styles of novels and it is mixed so well! system, getting property from the system, harem, and weak to strong it seems like! I’m very excited to see where this goes! And keep up the great work author!
Great Writing and interesting characters. Freya has very strong personality, I definitely want to learn more about her, and Artium is also very interesting. Can't wait to read there future adventures!
hey author where are you bruh its been a week i didn't see any updates are tou okay
Love the novel. However, it seems they threw the translation quality out the window after they returned from the hiatus. Such a shame, it was a pretty good novel.