Ol' Amos, you've seen too much. Its either friendship or die! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Omg! I’ve been waiting for updates on another app i’m so happy i found this here! I really want to finish reading this book.. thank u
Mane why tf is he gonna marry his sister y’all on some weird shit bruh
Update it plz
I really really want to open up the eldest brother's head and see what kind of trash is accumulating there .......what does he like or should I say love about lan youyou? ..... c'mon u are simply harming Yourself as much as harming others around you by doing this ......and lin xueluo this woman I guess she herself realizes that she'll never learn will she .....these ppl are simply dragging innocents into their feuds and not just one innocent person but many ...
First off this is really well written. Writing about MOBA's can get tricky because you risk a massive info dump, but I think the author has done a great job of it while keeping it interesting.
I like the character types, but I feel they are too rigid in their archetype, I would have liked a little more gray and less black/white. Still that is fine and the archetype for the mc is particularly interesting. My real problem with the characters is their age vs how they behave/talk, they definitely behave/talk above their age.
I hope the author continues doing such a good job and we get to see a really good coming of age story.
Sorry guys but i have no other way left so i deleted My old book and added chapter here sorry but now you can read the story here i haven't changed anything
So far great story, great character development, interesting plot development, and I hope most of all this story gets great villain MC's that can me disgusted.
Couldn’t recommend enough.
I really like your content so far. You attention to detail is what i find most intriguing. I liked the character arc of the protagonist and the direction his story is heading. Its looking good overall and i am eagerly waiting for the next one
Top class novel avoids that useless troupe of chance encounter with women to form romance and harem , sensible mc not just useless chance encounters, but author Nim when are you dropping new chapter or have you dropped the novel
its an incredible book, i cried like hell when it ended. i wish it could have gone forever. but i loved every second of it
moxie is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ngl I didn't expect to find a gem like this after skimming through the web novel writing competitions. definitely donating my power stones here after they recharge. keep up the amazing work