itarotchi
Compared to True Martial World's translator, the translator of this novel is way too greedy. While comparing their translations on both novels, the translations on this novel is subpar with a lot of grammatical errors. If you're going to compare it to TMW's smooth translation and not google translated which you can read from 7-11 spirit stones per chapter and unlocks after a week or so where you can read it for free, this novel's beyond compare and beyond redemption. Though a lot of people are still reading this novel (well, me included) this novel is becoming like those novel that are being dragged too much to become a milking machine for the author/ttanslator. 1.1k plus chapters and the protaginist is still a weakling. And the stroy being too much of a repetition. That's a hell of snail paced and over hyped and mainstream chinese novel for you.
5 stars cause even though all it is, is him having sex with his adoptive mother and his sister lusting after him: it's good. The sex is good and that's all this novel is. So if you like a MC having hot sex with his beautiful mom this is for you. There is pretty much nothing you can spoil in this novel.
My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!
I'm enjoying the story much to my surprise. Grammar needs to be polished though, but all in all it's my cup of tea.. Hope you would improve your writing skills I suggest.. Or get an editor or just a proof reader that would be perfect.. Nothing much to say about some plotholes. Nevertheless, it's good.
tell m another name for novel I can't find In google.......bte dena .koi????????????????????????????????????????????????????
An interesting premise and decent idea.HOWEVER : 1)The novel is very blatant in its "propaganda" for a certain country with the standard "this country is the only one with actual intelligence and civility, The rest are barbarians that want to join us." 2) This is a harem, The difference from the standard harem being that there is no romance. In other words the worst parts of harem only. MC is the only male even mentioned for the majority of the story.3) Issues constantly regarding any mention of price as the translator couldn't copy-paste the symbol properly.4) Very point to point. Curious if a certain character will be ongoing/reoccuring? Is she an attractive woman? If so then yes. Is the woman, who just turned up immediately after an info dump regarding a "mysterious" topic, related to said topic? Yes directly.Overall : I despise harem but this novel could still be barrable if it weren't for the constant "meta commentary" and "Pro-(a certain country)" propaganda, It isn't even well masked. This novel is around 70% pro-certain country propaganda and using false history to make it sound glorious, 10% describing women, 10% info dumping, 5% MC prattling about playing LoL and 5% of actual interesting story.Would not recommend unless you are utterly desperate.
Lala one of my fav novel! No no no no no no no no no lala la la la la why minimum of 140 words for a ****** review aww shet so hard to reach that minimum come on qidian do something about this i hate doing reviews with minimum number of words it is like you have an assignment and that is essay and that is explain what is love with minimum og 1000 words that a **** like hell do u even know how I feel about restricted essay well the long one okay? But I want to say that I love this novel so much
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Forgot to write a review last night but Im writing a review rn
These ****ers stole from chestnut and now they are making us pay for what was originally free. Can someone hack this site to teach qidian a lesson.
amazing story ...
The book is becoming too long
