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why can't there be a novel were the little sister character or female character isn't pampered by the MC for once I mean come on it's getting on my nerves
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The story starts with lots of action. The fight scenes are described in great detail. The writing style is very enjoyable to read. The main character's actions seem logical and his feelings and emotions are well conveyed.The reader finds out more about where the novel takes place along with the main character as the story unfolds. This is a very interesting book to read!
Amazing story so far. It is well written and had interesting characters. There are a couple grammatical errors where the word he is used for a female character but this doesn't take away from the story in a massive way. I would highly recommend the story.
This is actually really good and gives me like this feeling when reading an actual book than a novel. Feels quite professional in a way and the english seems advanced with barely any mistakes. I hope more will be updated and that it gets more attention.
I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
Beast taming -_-
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Here we go again.Look at the review and you will see tons of idiot calling MC is plagiarizing.This is just fiction, get a life if you have time criticizing a fictionally character. If you don’t agree to me then don’t reply to me, I don’t want to get contaminated by your stupidly.
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This review is not a short little sentence giving five stars and saying a single sentence which is I liked it, nor is this a short review giving 3 stars say that it's not good and I expect better latter on. This is a real review giving genuine criticism something only a human can do not just some recycled line from a comment bot.The writing is good simply put it's good your writing level is already near-professional I haven't spotted any typos or major grammatical errors most of your sentence flow well and have no issues with them.Though your chapters are very sporadic and random, I'd recommend that if you write more than you need in a day you should stockpile. Them and wait a day or a few hours before reposting so it gets as much exposure on the updated list as possible so more people can see it. That way your schedule would be more organized afterward, and you would be able to get more views.The main content for this is mostly religious text but the way that it's communicated is mostly through the author's personal anecdotes which is what makes the story worth reading. Just religious text and content may make a book but it probably wouldn't be good the bible already exists what's the need to rehash it. The anecdotes in this story are good usually, anecdotes don't just stem from how interesting your life is but the context and what your willing to share. This story is pretty transparent you can see the reflection of the author in it which is what makes it good. You need reliability and humanity in a book and that's what makes it interesting what lets the reader sympathize and learn.I'm not religious and I'm not interested in becoming religious I was an Athesist turned agnostic. I'm not going to lie I scoffed at parts in the story because it doesn't fit in with my ideologies. But I read it anyway so I'm going to share a personal anecdote.When I was in school, Elementary or Preschool I can't quite remember I was talking to this kid he was talking about God and I told him I didn't believe in God he told me I was a sinner and he would never talk to me again, and he convinced a few other kids not to talk to me either I was pretty upset at the time, but after a few days I pretty much forgot about it I had my own friend group at the time and wasn't really affected. But after a month he came up to me and said he was sorry, he was in the wrong and he accepted that and apologized. Although I was young at the time I accepted it and moved on. The point of that is it doesn't matter if your religious or not all people are human beings and deserve as much respect if someone is an Atheist and in the wrong, they should apologize, same with Christians or any other religion, we're all people so don't go out of your way to antagonize people for their religion. You think you're just trying to persuade them into dropping their religion but you don't notice what it does to them afterward.As for whether or not this really belongs on Webnovel who can say it's not something that you would conventionally see on this website. But as for if it belongs or not that's up to you author.
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