Urghhh..
To be honest, the story was good.
But how story progress was not that good
The mc was a RETARD. The identity as transmigrator from earth was useless or no used.
Well sure cliché here and there, but the mc feel so stupid.
So munch potential, maybe kingdombuilding later in the novel
I've read through Chapter 121 and I can say that in my mind this has finally gone from just a well-written story with lots of potential to a story with really good development and follow-through. I can't wait to see where this series continues to go!
Great story and RAW LINKS here
https://m.biquge.com.cn/book/42227/
thnx me in prayers
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Ceo genre novels are kind of not my cup of tea. But, this one here had quite piqued my interest by hooking me in the first chapter. Well, what should I say? This one here is a good book to read.
Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.
Can someone tell me how this rubbish get into top 1 of power ranking? I just dont understand. Its always trash novel that get higher rank while a lot of other underrated novel which have better grammars, storyline and plot without being soo cliche and copycat
I have no problem with the story quality. It is interesting for me and I can see the passion of the writer. My advice are to not overly use commas in one sentence. Maybe lessen them by making it to another sentence. I also want to suggest to change your dialogues into this "You are amazing," He said in a low voice. (if it was an active convo) but use "You are amazing." He said in a low voice. (If it is the end of convo). Well, good luck! Your novel will reach its success as I see the potential! Kudos!
The world-building and setting development is done really well, and I can see the aspects of Tornado's character:) I really liked SAO, and I can see the inspo from it! some errors, but all in all an amazing zombie story!
story repeats over and over, it's really horrible .
At first I thought it's even worst then 'Summoning the Holy Sword' as it's badly executed. It tried to be 'Amber Sword'. What made 'AS' good was not explosive knowledge but how he used it. I can't help but find 'Night Ranger' better than this one.
MC- This MC is very egoistic and keeps repeating the same mistake of being caught everywhere because he doesn't keep his mouth shut. I don't like how he uses his knowledge as it feels too forced.
But honestly, it does get slightly better around the 50's, to the point where I want to read more of this story. I see a lot of potentials but at the same time I don't want to get my hopes too high if MC keeps messing up like this. But if he shows improvement then I think this story worth reading. But hey at least this is not Harem right? There might be a chance it's good..
The story is interesting, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.