sigh, really disappointing, he is one of those mc that helps other characters getting a harem, read the title and connect the dot, yes, he helps his friend and im not into reading a mc that goes around helping other get harem so im out
Reading what you’re writing would be a good way to improve.
Nothing is explained or shown, only told. Almost everything is reliant on prior knowledge.
Try working on the “don’t tell, show” rule.
la historia tiene algunos conceptos y cosas interesantes acerca del dao, pero yo que uso traductor, la historia se me hace un poco incomprensible debido a su redacción o esta mal escrito??, cuando uso el traductor el texto tiene sentido pero aquí es un poco incomprensible y difícil de entender
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No words, my friend, no words. Hope ALL is famous just like you lol. But anyway noice one. This is a nice novel. All I can say is HOPE ALL.
This a complete copy of another novel forgot the name tho
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Alot of Grammer mistakes and story narration is not that great. But every scene is told in detail in simple words. It will be better with more grandik words and lesser Grammer mistakes. All the best
Dis is sogood...i loved it to the core if my heart.i want to show the bonding of vrishketu with all the pandavas especially arjuna..
I also want to see vrishketu warrior skills
This is a very good book, unlike many other book the main charactor doesn't revolve around one thing. The charactor while some what hard to predict will still act like themself.
HMMM GOOOD SO FAR NEED MORE CHAPTERS THOUGH>MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
this seems good give raw
I refuse to give a good review when the translator auterates the novel, such as altering the characters' names..........................................