Even thought this is similar to "The Legendary Mechanic" and "I am a Legendary Boss
More chapters please I love the story so far.Also can you make the mc a little bit more op? He needs to open more bags and become a god between next chapters.Work hard on this and make new chapters please.
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A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly. Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh. But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
Everyone hates the FL and everyone who doesn't is so annoying you end up hating them. There's not a single likable character in this novel. There's no plot.The whole novel is about the FL encountering characters that hate her and wants to scheme against her but end up falling flat on their faces. If you like that sort of thing, I guess you're in for a treat. But it's not my cup of anything.
Really enjoying this so far! He’s gonna be kicking a*s soon! The only criticism I have is maybe fix up some grammatical errors, but everything else is good!
Overall the tone of the story is set from the beginning. I can't see any grammar mistake and the character has its own space when the chapters go forward. keep up good work author.
Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!