This is one of the best novels, I have read. The plot and characters are just amazing. It is a real gem. I just hope that the novel will get more updates in the futur. Thank you author for this novel ?
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one of the best horror stories i have read but felt like the chapters could have been longer but lets wait and see what happens in the upcoming chapters
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Don’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad badDon’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad
I'll start with this: it is bad. I think I'm being pretty generous with my 3-star rating and mostly because it was not bad enough that I had to stop reading. It was good enough to kill time for someone who has read and watched so much media that it is difficult to find something that piques my interest.No element of the plot is original and nothing ever goes wrong for the main character. The protagonist of the novel he transmigrates to is short-sighted so he does most of the work for the main character, who is supposedly the villain of the story. I've read half of the novel already and the teased "shop" of the system is still locked meaning there is little point to the system he gets aside from the starter boons he gets. This novel could've been more interesting if the villain started without a system and had to work just a tiny bit harder to get what he wanted.
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
my problem with this novel is that the novel has 50% mc pov and 50% other unnecessary detailed story telling,it's just not good with the pacing,so many unnecessary pov killed the joy for me.Otherwise a pretty good story and new ideas.Just the story pacing is too slow for me.
Lazy genuis that's new but I hope this story won't be boring too quick and the author should try to avoid bringing in a lady for the mc in the begining ... .Either way Im expecting a lot from this book
So far (31 chaps) it's looking like another strong book from aoki. For anyone wandering about capabilities, this is the same author that brought you 'reincarnated with a summoning system', which recently finished and is still high in the charts, and proves that aoki actually finishes books. This book is looking great so far, with better writing quality than ever, I can't wait for more!
I’ve only read the first volume. The first volume was amazing. The author proved his ability to make a great story by summarizing an entire novel in 30 chapters, but then you took it a nitch higher by making the MC someone who has actual love for people. He does what he has to when the time come, but he just wants to keep his adoptive family safe. Not afraid to admit that you also did a great job with makIng my eyes water a few times with his “children’s” backstories and him taking them in. If his personality stays the same from here on he’s going to be my all time favorite MC. Cannot wait to continue reading!
lol I just realized the author added netorare tag, sigh if he added early I would have not wasted my time with this fucking shit..................