Yuht… pretty good. Keep it up. Got pote ntial
The only way this fic is top and has a lot of votes is because is the first you see to unlock fast passes, that's all.
One of the worst novel i have ever read .....LIve broadcast.Blue earth so typical ch racism.Another novel that copy paste this backstory of dungeon coming from other dimensions.So much thing repeated again and again .... I won't spoil so i stop here but don't read it or you are gonna hurt yourself.
Hey! This one stands out and in a good way. Let's hope it gets translated. The MC is a necromancer who deals with the intersection of life and death, delving into the domains of necromancer and nature magic. The author seems ambitious in his worldbuilding. Let's cross our fingers and hope this one gets picked.
Alright, this story is kinda bad. First off, the main character has a system that rewards him for doing "ordinary" things. For example, making food, cutting logs, fetching water. Things that a ordinary villager would do. Thats fine and dandy, and theres definitely a way to make this into a novel, however this is not how you do it. Not far into the novel, the main character is fighting people left and right. Literally every other person he meets he ends up assassinating because they have some bad thoughts towards his junior sister who hes protecting. First off, lets start with the story development. The female lead (main character's junior sister) is actually a genius who died, and then regressed back in time. The main character is a reincarnator. So, the female lead constantly gets into trouble, and it's not even funny. Literally every other sect wants to kill her, refine her into a pill, force her into being someones maid, etc. It's actually ridiculous. You see, the longer the story goes on, the more and more the main character is using his parody-level overpowered strength to assassinate people seventeen major realms above him, and it's just not fun to read. The main character literally gets stronger from doing ordinary things, it's fine if the main character occasionally goes out to protect the female lead, but it shouldn't be this much. It ruins the entire point of the main character staying low-key and having parody-level strength. As for the characters? They suck, plain and simple. It's one of those "you dare kill me, young master of blah blah blah" then "you dare kill my son" then repeat endlessly until it's devolved into a massive war. Like what I mentioned previously, it's just endless conflicts in a novel that was originally a slice-of-life-cum-action novel. Now, it's just a action novel. The female lead is beyond stupid, it can't be put into words. Imagine being able to regress, and relive your life, and somehow causing even more problems than you did in your previous life. Female lead says shes going to protect her sect and senior brother, but ends up doing the exact opposite. The main character has to help her out from the shadows over and over again, which causes even more trouble. It's just endlessly repeating fights.The world background is alright, average at best. The main character barely leaves his sect so theres not a whole lot to be told, even with him occasionally leaving to fight someone.Overall, the plot and characters are rather poor, and it very quickly devolves into a endless-combat action novel. Which, believe it or not, isn't that fun to read.
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I think the pace needs to be fastened a bit but the whole story and plot are fantastic. I love Daniel a lot. He is truly a gold-hearted person.??????Sending love.
Review time!Honestly, didn't expect much. It's about the mc with his three daughters, who are about 4 - 6 six years old.To chapter 20, it's still mostly aimed at the oldest daughter with some screen time giving to the two other sisters. The mc comes from a declining cultivation family, like the sypnosis said, but only one other 'servant'? is aware of this.Mc has a SYSTEM, a check-in system but it only appeared in one chapter or so.Faceslaps are a given and shines brightly in this novel. Overall, the novel is better than the expired fast food novels these days and does have some potential but I won't bet on it.Translation Quality: 4*SoU: 5*Story development: 3* (Kinda cliche and is highly predictable)Character design: 3* (You have 20 chapters but the spotlight was especially on the oldest daughter)World background: 2*, nothing.... Really nothing....Overall rating: 3.4*Personal rating: 3.1*
Love it. Keep up the hard work. Surely your story will find success. I hope you do not give up on it. I wish you all the best.
A kingdom bulding story in a cultivation world context ? A polygamous guy who will spread his genius genes of cultivation (future genius because yes intelligence is a form of genius) ? Where is the author of this story so that I can call him grandpa ?!
The story and concept is amazing the way the writter has conveyed his thoughts in words are mind-blowing the characters are beautifully written, I noticed few punctuation mistakes but the story was good enough to sugarcoat it. So , overall beautiful work author
Moar!