It's a very good novel. One of the hidden gems of webnovel. Was a bit irked by the start cause the MC was never mad at his master for killing him but the dynamic between them is very interesting. It has a slight romance subplot with the master and the MC as well as the masters other follower. They aren't too OP that the book is boring, just perfectly balanced as all things should be. Overall a very good book and I definitely recommend everyone to give it a read.
continue uploading these novel please. I really like these novel.
warning it's a spoiler it's to ggggooooooooodddddddd it's so godam good ???????????????????????????????????????????
Would have been better if MC wasn't so evil This kind of 'evil hypnotism' is one of the most common tropes seen japanese hentai. I like the concept but I hate this kind of story development. What I mean is, why should MC make the girls as his slaves? Why not into lovers? What's point in having s*x all day? That's just pure wish fulfillment. This could have more realistic and could have been made into a unique and popular novel if the MC wasn't a sadist pervert. Just think about having hypnotizing powers and use it destroy your enemies and not ur loved ones.
i have read until the end, author just deux ex machina-ed an end. but I will still give it a 5 cause it is still a 'good' enough novel.still though, as much as I hate his existence in novel, I have to give mc's predecessor an o7 for his choice, not many would choose the one he did.
I am loving this novel I like doctor novels and systems with the two combined it makes an altimate novel in my opinion hahhahahahahahahahaha
At chap 1 but... EXPPPPPOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPP
@fallenblue, I would like to say that I really enjoy reading your story. So far it is going great and have high hopes for it.I like it how Gio is the only ML . And sofony and gio are perfect for each other. I like their increasing feelings for each other ....and it would be great if their will be romance between them. Gio is a bad ass guy and I would also like for sofony to do immoral stuff like crime , murder , and other immoral stuff except *** with other than gio. I liked it how she found a loophole in her first mission ....it would be good if she does bad stuff to only other bad people...and a showdown between immoral system users would be great. And I also like liked the sexual content of sofony with gio.....and felicity and that female gangster is good...but I would love it if sexual content is more descriptive.Overall the novel is great ....most people would love reading it...
If done well this could be a really good novel but at the same time it could end up really crap. id like to see which one itll be just so i dont miss out on reading it if its done good
Atleast use some editing app if you are lazy doing it yourself. It is so confusing with all the sudden gender changes and whatnot.
this story has been completed but where is the full story ???
Love it. This is Dimond.World building character development everything is amazingGood luck and great job author