A really trashy novel, dont bother reading it. So little is explained of the MC, his System, or the world in general. The whole thing reads like the author is just spewing out random plot and the readers are supposed to just know what he was thinking at the time. It's atrocious. In regards to the MC, he comes across as an actual MMO character. As in, someone logged into a random MMO then without care for the story, plot, or quests, just ran about killing things and showing off like they're a boss.
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1 star story development. MC has been there for years but once he got the system Enemies suddenly pops outs and starts messing with MC.They have years to get the garden when MC entered the sect. like i would imagine snaching from a newbie would be way easier right.Also it is protrayed that the Wang clan has this grand plan years in the making.Why don’t they get the garden when they had the chance?Story has a lot of plot holes.Translation is 2 stars as there’s some miss translation like Catties turned into tonne…Story background 2 stars cuz meh and it is drag down by the poorly thought out plotline.Character design is 2 stars cuz it’s MC starts learning into the trouble seeking MC category. we all know the problem with the trouble seeking MCs right?MC would deliberately be provocative inorder to drive the plot. Someone makes trouble? MC kills it! Then the master shows up to mess with the MC for killing deciple. It all happens simply because the MC simply cant be polite
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Fun premisemuch more interesting Than plain check in novels.
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Aunque es pronto para decirlo ya que la novela no tiene muchos capítulos, me gusta como se desarrolla, es mucho mejor que las novelas chinas normales ya que aunque muchas son muy buenas siempre tienen sus defectos, como a veces son racistas, considerándose seres superiores y oprimidos por todos los países (ej. Eu, japón, Corea, etc) se considera sin defectos, o alaban descaradamente a su gobierno como perfecto, o incluso el protagonista es un imbecil ya que puede matar a sus enemigos, conseguir bellas chicas o destruir el mundo y se contenta con ser un don nadie o se vuelve arrogante y casi lo matan.Está novela no es así, el protagonista es centrado, sabe que no es invencible ni el pez más grande, confía no solo en su sistema, sino en su experiencia de vida anterior como un hombre exitoso para salir adelante y predecir a sus enemigos y no se anda por las ramas con las mujeres, no solo toma la mano de una chica en 200mcapitulos,mismo que se acuesta con ellas y no está obsesionado con su pureza y aunque es un poco vacilante al principio sigue sus propios deseos. Por último la novela está bien escrita y el autor está haciendo encajar las partes bien, protagonista entretenido, chicas hermosas con personalidades diferentes y sus desarrollos (con sexo) y tramas futuras xianxia o sobrenatural. Creo que merece leerse y tiene mucho potencial de desarrollarse, puede llegar a ser como las grandes novelas pero única como against the gods, abandoned son.
l am loving this book. great that that character is improving so quickly yet not becoming a creep because of it. I really like the magic mixed in with the cooking. although I am an American and there's very little of the food that he describes that I would actually eat because here in the states we're spoiled and we aren't creative and we don't eat all parts of animals. I know it's my loss. I would probably try something if I didn't know what it was or didn't recognize it. but if I did know. I wouldn't eat it. of course except the rice and the sweet and sour pork and the green tea. so many girls in his restaurant I wonder who's going to become his female interest. so many of them are starting to look in his direction.
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This novel isn't bad, but it unfortunately seems to e heading the harem route. MC also makes questionable decisions, and seems to have an IQ of 80 or below.FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
Great Novel liked the concept , I hope it's quality won't go down..........................................................................................................