Its criminal that this book doesn’t have a full 5-star rating. This is an amazing book which brings you into its world and leaves you wanting more. If (like myself) all you’ve been consuming recently is power-fantyasy system novels this is the thing to restore your faith in webnovels and their ability to make you more than a system novel junkie. Also my favourite part is that the main character has secrets that even we, the readers dont know yet. Serious intrigue.
The writing style gets confusing, you don't know if the writing is referring to the MCs thoughts or something else. Doesn't do justice for the name of the novel, you seriously consider the time line where the story takes place it lasts a few months at most the rest is in his imagination towards the end. Serious accusations on other novels when this own novel is such a subpar work.
Renowned author DemotivatedSloth returns with an incredible work of deep symbolism and meaning. His most recent work-- or better put, his newest piece of sacred artwork descended from the holy muses of writing-- "While others cultivate, I use RPG leveling system to cultivate their girlfriends
Sounds nice :D Finally a main character that's evil (mabye?) I'll give it a five star for now. It sounds pretty good from the synopsis :)still not 140 characters yet...y qidian
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translation gets horrible after paywall, don’t bother with this one.
Nice concept, I like it.Everything is fine I guess, but I have some thoughts about where is the 'magic concept' I thought the MC will have something like fire ball skill, lighting skill, or something like that, so he can use it for do something lewd.
Anyone who knows about raws>. ...... This is really a brilliant story can't wait to read ahead.
Before you go on a three paragraph rant about how I'm an uncultured swine who can't understand this "complex" fast-paced novel please be patient with me, or don't, either way, it doesn't make a difference. This novel is a pretty much-overdone cliche of the vicious cycle of "revenge" with a sprinkle of poor writing. Put down your torches let me elaborate. Pitchfork down? ok so essentially, the basic introduction of the plot is the overdone checklist of cliches, a beautiful unrivaled girl who no other can rival? check. Betrayal of a said beautiful girl or literally anyone close to him? check. What's this he's also trash but somehow the reason he's trash is cuz of a thing no one else has and now he's gonna prove the haters wrong? check. Merit is to be made that cliches were created because they work and blah blah blah, please shut up the only reasons cliches work is because it panders towards a certain demographic and said demographics are also the types to forgive this godawful terrible blight on storytelling. The concept is the only thing supporting this work, like for Allah's sake the characters are so god damn one dimensional, not a single one person has a fucking personality, not a one, and no calling someone trash over and over again or being slapped in the face does not count as them having a personality. That my friend is just a face slap, gosh i think the author of this work only creates characters to face slap and boy, do they get face slapped quite a fair bit. TLDR; Cliche Tropes overused, a boring world(like seriously all i know about this world is that a lot of sects exist and that they have an epic gladiator arena) and poor character development. I would rather read those CEO novels instead as they are forced to actually make the readers engage and care for their characters.
Always love ur stories keep up the good work !!! I always end up wanting more so heres me contributing to the bonus chappie Need more chapters please
A great book with good plot design so far as well as character building. I would definitely recommend this book for everyone to try as it would be a pity if u miss it, provided the author releases the chapters on time..
finally someone posted this novel here I know you're not the owner but thanks.time to use audioplay to read it my eyes hurt ????.......