Started reading but didn't manage to get hooked on it. Getting some X-men vibes, a MC that understandably doesn't want to loose the comfy life he didn't get the first time around, and a solid world based on our current one but with some alterations. It doesn't sound bad, but the pacing for me seems slow, very descriptive on certain aspects that could have been glossed out, and a veeeeeery long prologue (I get it, setting all the info required for the story, but still feels tedious).Also, not a fan of big announcements at the end of a chapter.Hope this story turns out great, it simply isn't my cup of tea.
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Very nice and interesting story l must say.... I also liked the way ML is... He is really cool....Also liked the author's writting skill..... Its look like a professional...Looking forward to the next chapters..
I just got to first 5 chapter but story seems to be forced.1. First time going with a date with a roommate's sister where roommate asked him to go to date. But, their father gets him kidnapped by Mafia just because he don't like his daughter going on a date with anyone and want to test MC.2.Asking the boss of said Mafia to adopt him when he just wounded some of the Mafia members and Mafia boss agrees to it.
Overall solid and consistent writing and story. Definitly lives up to its title with a character that isnt afraid to analyze the situation he's in. A promising story from a promising author.
Other than a few spelling and grammar errors (namely capitalization and sentence flow), this book seems great for my collection! Awesome premise, but im afraid the writing quality is only about ~3.5 stars. So overall 4.6, pretty good!Dont feel discouraged, your writing skills are bound to get better with time!
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
I have not completed reading yet.......but it's very Interesting story.....I m loving it....the character that I found the most interesting one is a writer itself..... somewhere it says my cousins story........so yaa I really feel attached to the story
hello I've just finished reading this book and I Like what I've seen so far( even though it is not much ) so I hope you can release more chapter for a better view and opinion on your book thanks
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This story is so good, for anyone reading this comment, I highly recommend it ?