not what you'd expect. both the title and synopsis are basically bait, and only work for the first 10 or so chapters.
then things start going out of hand, ridiculous reveals keep happening that we barely understand and before we get explanations, other reveals happen and those before get shoved out of the way and only get some basic explanations if you read between the lines.
overall, to enjoy this you must have your brain online (you must think while reading this! no brain-dead reading where you forget things you dont like!), and thus see its faults, which is both a pro and a con for me. still ill give it 5 stars just because how different it is from others of its sort. and remember, dont believe what is "established", whether its by mc's or narrator's perspective.
PLEASE SOMEONE FIND THE RAWS
What drew my attention to this novel? The Yande-*cough* definitely the System tag, always been a big system enjoyer. The story is very promising and doesn't have anything to complain about, yet. I'm gonna keep following this novel to hopefully see it prosper.
Anyone know what's the new of the raw version? and no Mr_N00B it ain't that. Nor is it what you said taoistq77svs.
The idea alone of being able to make and control your own dungeon in a fantasy land was enough to get me interested in this story, and I'm so glad I stayed and read, the updates could be a lil ore frequent, but honestly, it's always worth the wait for each chapter :)
wow, what an amazing story, I love how you describe everything....I was hooked at the first chapter. keep up the good work author.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's not that bad, ig. It's just right in the middle. It's okay to pass time, although I'm a little disappointed it wasn't that much beast tamer focused. The title really misleads. It's about the clan at first but then turned into a one man show of Chen Yang (MC) with the addition of his beasts. The cheat wasn't also explained that much, like how and why's. Anyway, read it if you're bored.
This seems like an interesting read so I decide to pick it up. I wasn't disappointed since many story have something cliche about them. But it has a good plot so I want to say keep up the good work
As the writer of the book I will of course give myself a five star review :P. Anyways i hope that you guys enjoy the novel please leave me any constructive criticism or nonconstructive I can take it. Have fun reading my novel and remember i hold all the spoilers he he.
I was even interested but I don't like mind break and even as a mortal the mc's power still causes it in women. Anything involving mind manipulation and mind breaking I'm out.
You got to edit the whole book so many mistakes the flow of the story have so many unexplained parts and actions that just pop up its a good novel please fix it
Overall this novel is pretty good, the protagonist is interesting and while the story is not that amazing it's still pretty interesting and good enough for a fun read