Man I read all the other cf books, but hands down this has the slowest beginning of all of his books combined, even I had trouble getting over the first 100 chapters.
Any websites have a better translation?
The first 200 or the last 200?
Because bro the bottom 200 are really mediocre
If this was a real life then some weak Cultivators would have already killed his sister and Gf unknowingly because he's always hiding his f*ck*ng strength. Why the f*ck does he have to hide his f*ck*ng strength when there is no benefit except for Author who wants add pointless Plot armours. This story is perfect except for the useless plot Armour
The pace of the story is too fast
The story is as awesome as it can get, it's the most popular chinese novel on the western market, but the update stability is plain awful. The translator should be replaced with a more reliable one and when you are at it , it wouldn't hurt to also increase the chapters released to 10 per week or so, but firstly I would be happy if we just get the promised 7 per week
I really hope the author continues the story. i just started reading it and i am already binging it. it's really good, it's got a realistic charm to an old formula. it's trying its best to be good, and the author is trying hard to give his characters time to flesh out. Thank you pls continue.
*This just my initial review*
okay Mr. Author..
the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good..
but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter.
conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read.
example of conversations..
MC: "Hello there"
*Explanations of something useless or irrelevant*
Girl: "hey, how're you"
*inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations*
that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro..
if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less..
this is just my opinions.
because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same.
i dont know,
thanks.
honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea
keep up the good work
This is so good. I love this novel. Please rate it
Good story very nice to read and happily enjoy it with the different pacing of events
copy paste and speed run of the original with some changes and forced romance with stuttering stalker Hinata again. Don't bother, Very dull story and you're just waiting and waiting for something to happen to make the story interesting but it doesn't happen