Not bad I like the story and the characters, I love light novels about death, powerful main character and mainly where the main character turns in to a female, "gender bender"looking forward to the next chapter,
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This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
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I have been looking for a story that has a more macho MC that isn’t obsessed with being beneath the radar. He has a viable plot reason for being driven to spread his fame. The guy can flirt and beat face without worrying too greatly about thinking.Story seems like it the MC will actually act like an MC, while the author is just there to progress the story without making fights complete nonesense to drive up illogical scenarious.Overall, I am greatly anticipating this novels progress.
This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads
It's a very good novel and perfect for me.... Thanks author and editor (if any)....I have only read first ? chapters hopefully... It remains as interesting as it is now....
It's a shame. It was pretty decent up until C41 where the translator changed to MTL like always. Turning it to completely unreadable mush.
what can I say about it. It is a good story and has a plot but with the worst translation
it was great up until a certain chapter where there was a very explicit R-18 r*pe scene... no tags on the book about it. imo the scene wasn't written well at all and completely changes my view of the MC.. kinda disappointing as the start was great.