Honestly, I find it to be pretty fascinating. At first, I didn't think I would enjoy this story so much. But! Wow, d*mn, bro! I like it! (At least, in my opinion, this one has a certain allure.)Actually, this one is about stuff I like! Darkness and shadow! MC is described as "the incompetent prince," but ... u know someone that people thought was a loser could be a dangerous factor ?So... I was eager to read more!
Basicly shield hero with more revenge MC is from the way does things a nieve b17ch Didnt really enjoy it though it might be better for some younger readers 12-14
All those guys looking for an OP and ruthless and merciless MC move no further coz this WN got you covered. I have too much expectations from this amazing WN. Looking forward to the story.
A shameless person here gives you 5* for the first review. Hope you like ita very interesting story, a lot of potentials. Hope you can make it stable update and try to not drop this storygood luck for you author, GBY ^^b
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Nice... I like the story. I hope you won't drop it midway....................................................................................................................................................................................................xpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpx.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Fucking great, I love everything about it, the only downside is that there isn't more of it!Warhammer for the win!What more do I have to say to get to this fucking 140 word limit?
well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows
I have read all the reviews, but I'll wrote mine. Most have a point, but I'll say it was only just bland at the beginning as the writing was awful. But this gets better gradually, and the grammars really improved.Though, this book has a lot of cringy moment or statement, but it's actually good.The world building, well, is slowly built up. The same goes for the characters. The power system is simple and straight forward, easy to understand. And the same for the magic system, simple and easy to understand. In fact with its foundation, it's easy to formulate what the next rank could be like instead of having random nee tiers drop from no where.The book has a lot of potential, the only thing I'll say is that, though there is gradual improvement, but the writing skills needs some more upgrade.If the writing skills improve, this book will be a 4, and if possible full 5 star rating.Thanks
kakakaka. I like such novels which go back in time and rebirthsWaiting for more chapters................................................................
The story is good! I scored it 5 for every point because it is just simply good!The story and characters are nice, the broken speech of the younger sister is interesting!So is the way the antagonist olots against him.I wonder why you don't have more interest - probably because there's no hook or really cool thing to catch a reader in the title, synopsis or first chapter?Maybe put 2-3 paragraphs of AFTER he has gained power at the start? Then flashback to the start of the story?