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the more I read the less I knowtoo many thing remain untold and it's quite annoying to read ahead without knowing themcourtesy of taking a mystery genre too seriouslyalso it has awkward dialogs(clearly english isn't author's first language)and it seems to be a rookie author toobut all in all it has potential
This is the type of novel that I love the most in WebNovel; the storytelling is captivating. I just hope for an interesting development of the story and a beautiful ending. I highly recommend this.
Start is good, but need more release rates, waiting for more chapters,hope its more different than SAOwith this 140 characters are complete
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This is a very high-class and sophisticated novelWhich requires extreme IQ and knowledge of political events around the world to truly appreciate!The World building is Top Class, If there is no 3th wall breaking by the author whatsoever. Power level seems balanced and the fights so far are very exciting ;) oh and it has foreshadowing so it must be good
This story starts out very similar to another novel on here, Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, where the MC is originally a supreme being that died and is reborn/transmigrate into the same world years after his death. After awaking, the MC is OP with both cultivation and alchemy knowledge. Everyone around the MC, including the sect he is in, seems to have the IQ of a dummy and hell-bent on trying to kill him for the dumbest reasons. As for love interest, the MC is always reminiscing about his former lover that may or may not still be alive. There is a maid with a special constitution and two beauties that are acquainted with the MC.
I have no idea why this trash has nothing but 4 and 5 star ratings... The only thing that passes 1 star is the translation quality. We have a bipolar moron for an MC whos somehow a useless pervert and the most liked priest in the local church at the same time. A VR game that MC plays by using a controller... Thats right hes using a controller to play a game that has apparently so realistic VR system that not having a pain option causes you to forget even real life pain which is also the reason why MC refuses to use it...you know...because he doesn't like pain... So how does he compete with other people while pretending his holographic projections on the walls somehow match the realism of the actual VR system that creates a world in your mind where you enter the character and live and fight as the character? Its obvious really! He has a set of finger exercises for the control which in the very first chapter are proven to be nothing but childish coin tricks. This combined with his ability to see around his fake avatar he made fat on purpose grants him absolute not a fucking thing since author seems to have no idea how human body works... So whats his edge then? I bet every one guessed already! That's right! Its fucking plot armor! Since there's no fucking way his fat fingers would ever in any way come even close an actual thought controlled system the only advantage he has is his memories (which is funny since even tho he used the game as a source of income he apparently has very minimal knowledge of anything basic in game starting from the classes...) and his class which turns out that for 5 years everyone of the billions of players never realized that their stat distribution was wrong... A non sword wielding human avatar in a Chinese VR novel is the only + I can give the rest just makes you wonder why is this trash here in the first place...
I have a doggo he is a cutie. he makes me so happy when he shake his booty. he wags his tail cause he so happy. with him a day can not be crappy.
? gender bender yuri novel with good comedy, and other valuable literary devices and techniques in too lazy to mention? that's pretty good ?
Great novel!!After reading the few chapters, you'll hunger for more!!Author doing great work..............................................
