And started dancing like a little fan.
ahh alright thanks for the advice
The rage of the Emperor was so great that it lasted for the rest of the day. Nothing could pacify the rage until the Emperor himself finally calmed down. It took the entire palace half a day for them to recover from the burden of suffering the rage of the most powerful being in Heaven.
It was like any other day would be on earth in the year 2050, In fact you could say that it was one of the best days of the year so far. people were doing what their normal routines for that day or they were just trying to enjoy the day to its fullest. However that was not meant to be as all of a sudden a voice appeared in the minds of every living creature on the planet and spoke in every language that existed on the planet. "Testing 1.... 2.... 3....., can everyone hear me,... great it appears that you can first allow me to introduce myself I am the Wanderer of Time and I came to this world well, .... how should I put it without offending all of you, yes to kill some time, hahahaha get it because I am - no never mind, I will put it this way you inhabitants of this planet have been living in a closed box since you first came to this world and you have no understanding of the vastness of creation, but worry not I shall allow you to see the true nature of creation by opening this box and once it is open you will be able to have access to a power that is limitless as you let it take you."
"Just your stack, Naruto," Kakashi called idly, his nose otherwise in his erotica. "Everyone else has to learn to do it themselves."
duike:invisible dragon! can you use upgration selfdestroction evasion?!
I know a lot of people view ntr as a huge turnoff ,in fact I do too but this story is something else,I like how the characters are portrayed especially the mc and I can't wait to find out if his intuition was right all along,
updates are very sloww.............,....
The story is great am looking forward to more chapters's of it.
This book is really exciting and hot. Read it from the beginning and like it. Gonna recommend it to everyone and especially those who love hot and mature ones.
Writing Quality: Your writings understandable and readable with punctuation and grammar (better than 80%-90% of novels) and there's little to no spelling errors I've seen for now.Stability: Can't rate it well because there are only 3 chapters but it's looking good so imma give it the benefit of the doubtDevelopment: You've shown what the MC is capable of early on and shown what his eyes and wishes can do and the benefits they grant in 2 chapters which many fail to do with 10.Characters: Your keeping to the strength based world like the soul refinement guy looking down upon those weaker then him and his enemies giving up cause it's hopelessWorld background: Story is holding up and looks like your adding kingdom aspects into this (which is my sweet tooth) along with the steady development of the world instead of jumping 20 chapters every 3 lines
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