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It is an interesting story, the writing quality is good, stability is good, story development isn't new but has enough new elements that to make it interesting. The character design is typical of urban novels in fact sometimes a little to similar, but mc has child making it better. The MC isn't all that great, he is infected with the denseness, but also the good guy, forgiving type giving everyone 100 chances and he does not trying to get to bottom of things, it is hard to imagine him as an old wise person. The world building up this point isn't done too much but based on everything else it would probably be decent. Don't expect a vastly different story then other urban stories, but I liked it. So if you are fan of the genre and tags then give a go. The MC is a bit annoying at times but it is only 32 chapter up to this point and hopefully he will change.
I know it probably won't get picked but I think it is good enough to get picked.???????????????????????????????
Dropped chapter 6 for following reasons Stupidity with team in first huntStupidity with being classed as a king at lowly level 10Missing or incorrect words in translationStupidity of the old hag, a planet with 7 billion people and she uses the threat of death instead of finding someone who wants power and or adventures
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author San BRUHHHH this is now one of my favourite overpowered MC novel collection it's tooooooooooo good bruh ?✋ I feel offended by the greatness of it ???????
That game is weirdly exciting. I can't wait for him to play the puzzle. It sure gotta give me chills and hopefully not a heart attack. The anticipation itself is making me ...
Hi thanks for your review. Especially those who made multiple reviews over time. I dont know if its allowed in the server can anyone please enlighten me. Thanks again for your review.
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This is a very good ripoff, it is plagiarism.
The original is not only better, it does not force you to pay within the first 6 chapters. This is an author who had time to not only rip-off the origenal but also had time to edit and change a few things...
Guys sorry for spamming but I really want to read it after 40 chapters
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if I don't do it..... bucha noobs select same kinda sketchy story again....
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this is a refreshing change of pace
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I am giving it atleast 5