The plot seems decent let's hope it gets selected ?It seems like a combination a various urban CN's so I'm interested on the way it would turn out
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DISAPPOINTED BY THE WORK ETHICS OF THIS AUTHOR... HOPEFULLY WEBNOVEL WILL BAN THESE KIND OF AUTHORS THAT WILL CARRY US AND THEN DROP US WITHOUT ANY HESITATION....
Writing Quality : Good english
Stability of Updates : It's free 5 star 'cause i don't care about stability bs
Story Development : i drop at chap 111 i won't spoil but you **** your story like all the character development you did on Rezar seem to be useless....
Character Design : Most character apart from priest seem robotic and are pretty bad like the so-called princess acting all important while she clearly overstep her postion a lot ( chap 111 i just want to smash her )
World Background : Pretty innovative and cool
Anyway i drop i really like the idea but you make it seem so bad with how the story happen and the character any way good luck and it wasn't for the world background and the the free 5 star the story would be pretty much only value 3.5 star.
Good luck with your story. for me it's the end
I am shamelessly giving myself five stars as this is a great work of art expect loads of releases and be prepared to be amazed at the intricate designs of the novel
The Grammer is really bad! Also the where is the world background? This is a really bad novel you should stay away for your happiness! The MC is really retarded as well! He must have a lot of blood to get all those nose bleeds in one day and survive! All and all good premise but terrible after that!
I personally like this novel because it doesn’t follow the typically cultivation plot line where the protagonist slowing builds his strength while fighting stronger enemies. I also like how the protagonist does what he wants and also struggles emotionally with things like a normal person would and not some wise old sage.
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
Harem seaking mc .....op mc ....romance ....alpha mc....
This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novel
And lastly... Keep the good work, author.
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Worst of the worst... congrats for anyone who hasnt read this sh#t
The MC has no brain, the author doesnt use a logic in the story.
If u insist to read, then... yeah
Honestly this is one of the better original novels I’ve read on this app and I’ve read quite a bit. I think my most favorite part of this novel would be the facts that you learn from this novel as most of them are pretty accurate however the power system might change as I’m only on chapter 34. Overall the release rate is pretty good considering the content and story building. You can tell the author actually thinks and research’s stuff before he writes it down (he takes his time). Story building is great, but it can be improved slightly if he lets his readers gives some ideas to help improve it as a 2nd opinion would be great. 5/5 great novel.
Loved the book hope you enjoy It to like i did Loved the book hope you enjoy It to like i did Loved the book hope you enjoy It to like i did